haha, like everyone else i loved this book and wish there was more fanfic for it. adorable little ficlet, thanks for sharing it with us, and i loved it :D

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THIS AI REALLY GOD!U SHOULD MAKE A SEQUEL!

Hahaha. That's adorable. At first i was like, aw psh whatever he wouldn't care about being cruel to him. I still believe that, but those last two lines somehow made up for it.

That was a cute story! I loved it.

Oh My GOsh! That was so,so, so, so swet! I have read the book dragon's bait a long time and have been searching for a fanfiction story. Thank you very much.

This was really cute. *sighs about the lack on fanfic on this book* I liked the part where Alys choked on air...*giggles*

Great Job!
*adds to favs*

/:/Brizo/:/

Aw, that's sweet.

cool! i read this book ages ago...so i don't remember too many details but your story sounds good! can't believe there are others who have read this book :)

eheheh. This was good. You kept the characters IN character. I really appreciate that. Thanks and please continue? please?

Oh, please don't let it be a one'shot! At least write *one* more chapter for it!

pretty please?

Oh, that was adorable. You should definately keep writing Vivien Vande Velde fanfiction. ;)

You have no idea how long i have waited to read a Dragon's Bait fic...it was awesome! Yay!

*glomps* Gawwh! finally a fic for Dragon's Bait! Even if it was so short... ^^ I looked around for one a couple years ago and gave up looking... that and I couldn't manage to make myself wirte one... gah... you rule ^^

That was good. I like it!