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Reviews for: A Shining Star
Julianna Calavicci
2006-04-15 . chapter 1
Alyssa,

To answer your question concerning all the confusion, this is a sequel to a story called "Chances" by C. Selene. You can find it on this site.

PippinDuck, Beth came in in Chapter 12. I'm sure you just missed it. :)
PippinDuck
2006-04-11 . chapter 17
That was wonderful...I knew everything had to get fixed somehow. Very well done, both of you!
Alyssa Barnes
2006-04-11 . chapter 17
You two are AWESOME writers! I enjoyed every minute of this story!! You really had me going there, I was about in tears when I thought Al had died! Awesome, awesome, awesome story!
PippinDuck
2006-04-10 . chapter 14
This is getting heart-wrenching!! Keep up the good work, y'all! Between you and Kat, you're almost making me cry!
PippinDuck
2006-04-09 . chapter 12
Great updates...but I think a chapter got missed. Where did Beth come in? Sam Leaps out and all of a sudden Beth's in Al's living room? I want to know what happened in between! Keep up the great work!
Alyssa Barnes
2006-04-03 . chapter 11
You guys are such awesome writers! I can't wait to read more!
Alyssa Barnes
2006-04-01 . chapter 10
I was a little scared at first about this chapter but, I gotta admit it got pretty funny towards the end when Al started sounding just like himself again. You are a fantastic writer and I can't wait to read more!
Alyssa Barnes
2006-03-30 . chapter 9
Ok, I don't mean this in a bad way, but this story has me so freakin' confused (a few questions that might sound dumb...but I'm only asking cuz when I was little I loved the show but my mom wouldn't let me watch it much cuz she thought I was too little...when I was finally able to watch it again it had moved to cable and I didn't have cable anymore so this is why I'm asking these questions. Ok...1, how did their lab blow up? 2, did that actually happen in the series? 3, Did Al really get shot in the series by someone trying to kill Sam? I guess I only really saw up until season 3 of the show so I have a lot of catching up to do as each new season comes out on DVD.) but I'm so addicted to this story!! I love the relationship between Al and Carlie though I must admit there were a few times I found myself saying, "Whoa...might just be me but that's seeming a little more friendly than an Uncle who just met their niece." But in general I love the story! Like I said, it's confused the hell out of me but has got me addicted to it hoping I can figure it all out! Keep up the great work!
PippinDuck
2004-05-12 . chapter 5
This is really great. I do hope you write more on it.
Eleiece
2001-06-23 . chapter 5
I certainly hope you're going to finish this story! It's wonderful!
Rae Holland
2001-06-18 . chapter 5
Great Reading. Can't wait for the rest.
xfphile
2001-06-13 . chapter 5
Don't you dare stop there. The only thing I ask is that you work on keeping your tenses the same. It's a little disconcerting to have a sentence go from
third-person present to first-person present. Other than that, I just want you to hurry the hell up and finish this story!!!
Kim
2001-05-27 . chapter 5
Really brilliant story. Are you going to carry it on? It would be great if you did.
HASKAP
2001-05-12 . chapter 5
DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT!
HASKAP
2001-04-19 . chapter 4
*drops down to her knees* Please, please, CONTINUE!
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