Reviews for Running For Home

Reviews For: Running For Home

Professor Hermione Granger 2007-04-21 ch 1,	abuseOh, I love your story! I wish you would write a sequel! I want to know if they get together, or if they defeat Voldemort! :p This is the first Severus/Hermione story I read, and I really think it's cool, so now I want to go and read more, so thank yoU!
tina lebeau 2005-12-29 ch 1, anon.	abusePlz continue the story
Alex25 2005-10-11 ch 1,	abuseFor someone who wants to die, he sure said a lot to redeem himself. Anyway, nice one-shot, VERY angsty, my goodness.
Susa 2005-10-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseHi Emiri Do us a favor and write more Episodes of this Story. It is an really amazing Beginnig. I am looking Foward to read more Susa
five25600moments 2005-10-01 ch 1,	abusei loved it ... i can't wait to see where this is all going. What more can I say I am hooked. I hope you continue with this story. Please update soon.
Illustrated Girl 2005-10-01 ch 1,	abuseOh yeah, Snape and Hermione action even after the HBP, that's what we all want to see!
poemomm 2005-09-29 ch 1,	abusethis is quite well written -- though I do prefer a little less "**" from the professor -- it's just one of those words that is powerful when used extremely sparingly, but loses it's elegance and shock value when used too much...Not to offend you...but someone once told me that highly intelligent people use it sparingly and the rest of the world throws the phrase around likea vulgarity. Guess it always stuck with me...and Snape is ultra intelligent...but once again that's just my opinion... I do love this though -- so please update...you've go tyourself a new fan. naomi
notwritten 2005-09-26 ch 1,	abusePlease continue the story. It has alot of potential. I also like Hermione and Snape stories.
Winter Fae 2005-09-26 ch 1,	abuseAh! More, oh please please more. I want to see what happens next :)
amr 2005-09-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseYes, well, they both seem a little too morose here to fit the canon. Snape is, after all, a survivor; he has killed Dumbledore and saved himself for a purpose, and I can't see him abandoning that purpose. Likewise, Hermione's despair seems unrealistic. I can't see her really despairing as long as Ron and Harry are still alive. To be suicidal over a failed romance and her own inability to solve a riddle (which is in itself unlikely--I mean, even I know it's Regulus) isn't very Gryffindor.You might be able to fix it by making the circumstances more dire for both of them: For example, Snape has tried to go to McGonagall and been rejected (his letter returned unopened, perhaps); and Harry and Ron have actively rejected her as a friend for some reason...
Riley Black 2005-09-26 ch 1,	abusei love it...please continue, very well done
Shdwcat27 2005-09-26 ch 1,	abuseThat was so good. You have to continue. . . Pretty please with sugar on top and some of those chocolate sprinkles.
homeric 2005-09-26 ch 1,	abuseI enjoyed that - i hope you decide to continue it. You've kept Snape his usual snarky self but given him a bit more humanity which is by no means an easy feat! Great job ;)
Rogena 2005-09-26 ch 1, anon.	abusehm, new story... first thing to do...R&R of course, so here goes. First, I haven't read HBP yet (I'm dutch, we don't have HBP yet), so I don't wether Snape is acting out of character or not. If he killed Dumbledore, I can imagine feeling this way, and Hermione is a sort of drama-queen, so I can understand how se acts as well. Second, i like the plot, but i really think you should continue, for you're leaving an open end now, and there's nothing I hate more. hmm, quite a long review... Better stop here.

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