:0 . . . AMAZING! if u luv ur fans continue these kind of stories

hi! yes, i would like to see the sequal. this story is awesome! i noticed that at first, you said pikachu was fine, but in a later chapter, he was dead. this onfised me a bit. anyway, i seriously like this fic. you are a very talented author.

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very cheesy.

Pokemon sucks.

feel free to tell me otherwise.

IM me on AOL or AIM, SMoon778

toodles.

Truely wonderful (I'm not exeggerating)! Don't ever stop writing!

Loved your story! I just wish you could've done Pokémon: Revelations, Puppy-dog eyes please?

Good story!

I must say, it was *quite* an original concept! That was cool how Ash could turn into different pokémon. Weird, but cool. And that was a totally awesome twist near the end with Ash turning into Mechavian.

And I *always* love Mew appearances, although it took me a while to get used to Gary having one. Legendaries rule, huh?

Now, for a negative thing... (Sorry!) I think it was *very* OOC for Ash to care about Misty more than Pikachu. I see why you did it and all, with it being sort of an AAMR, but still...it seemed like Ash didn't care at all when Pikachu died!

I'm not usually supportive of the Giovanni being Ash's father thing, but I'll accept it for the sake of a good story. _

Wow, a lot of cool twists in this story! Not at all expected ones, which, the more unexpected the better in my book!

Overall, good story, and whenever you get the sequel out I'll definitely read it, okay? Bye now!

Hello Charmega/Lugia42! I didn't know you posted here too! I've seen da' page and you're doing great! I read your Poke'morphs story there and think it's awesome! I'll be checking back on it! Good stuff! I'm waiting on that other novel you've drawn the cover for! Keep it up! Happy Cheerios to you! And no, I don't know where that came from either.

It's good… *ignores preview of Revelations*

*whoops for joy* YEAH! Mewtwo Voice Normal voice managed to put a bit of humor in this one... i know i reviewed an earlier chapter after i finished the story, but i was reading it again, and decided to try and be humorous... i don't know if u found that funny... but newayz, e-mail me, we can chat!

-The Poké Princess

Creepy

Great! Can't wait for the sequel! *stamps the story with large, red FAVORITES LIST letters*

cool story! I can't wait for the next part!

Neferura -

This was a good story. I loved how you added all sorts of elements into the story such as time travel with future Gary meeting past Gary, the ole Giovanni is related to Ash thing plus the legendary Pokemon involved in battle. I liked the new Pokemon especially it's name Mecha which made me think of mechavelian, a perfect term for a dark Pokemon. Nice to see the story end on a cliffhanger, don't see that a lot here with most stories :-)

pretty good fic. in all honesty, it sounds like something i would write. with all the action/adventure and people dying, but then for some reason coming back, and everybody being happy at the end

wow! I love this story