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ImeldaLumos
2008-07-17 . chapter 8
This story must keep going. It was a bit slow in the beginning, but after reading that Wilson had been stabbed, the story had my full attention. Then, I couldn't stop reading, and I finished it, unfortunately, quite fast. So, waiting eagerly for the next chapter to be upload...
a-blue-feather
2006-09-22 . chapter 8
Brilliant story. Next chapter please!
ReeMaria
2006-06-19 . chapter 8
More? please, please PLEASE?! :D Loving the story! I read your first version, first, not realising you did a re-write. I was very disapointed to see it wasn't finished, so I'm so glad you have this one going, I just hope you continue!
WayLowHalo
2006-05-19 . chapter 8
omg, ur a good writer! Poor House tho, he's so worried about Wilson & on top of that his leg is getting much worse & he needs crutches now! Please, please, please, update soon!
Sara Wolfe
2006-05-18 . chapter 8
I fell in love with this story when I found it on FicWad, and I was elated to find that you had six more chapters up here. I can't wait until you update.
Country
2006-05-07 . chapter 1
Love this story. The emotion and the angst are particularly poignant. Please write more soon.
Rosethorn
2006-05-05 . chapter 1
Please finish. I'm dieing to know how you end it!
Spinereader
2006-05-01 . chapter 8
Oh hey, the review box now has a spellcheck feature! Very good idea.

Sorry, back to buisiness. Very intense. I found it very hard to put down. Rather than turning the experience of Wilson's wife leaving into a H/W lovefest as you so easily could have done, you took the plot in a completely different and more powerful direction.

Wonderful job you did on House's disability. You portray it vividly enough I found myself wondering if you have one yourself. It honestly felt that realistic. Has it gotten worse since the accident with Wilson or does it just seem that way because we (the readers) are seeing it through House's eyes?

I'm glad you brought Stacey into this. I just loved her in canon and I love the way you've written her.

In the future you might just want to leave the story in plain format when you upload and go add the coding in later with Quick Edit, because FFN keeps eating your italics tags. This site is always screwing up coding.

I'll be sure to keep checking back to this story. I'd love to see where it goes.
bmax
2006-04-30 . chapter 8
I'm enjoying this story all over again. This last chapter-House finally giving in to using crutches- he's gotta be hurting to let it beat his own ego. Did that make sense?

I like the addition of Stacy in the story and also the flashbacks are great. Looking forward to more of this rewrite.
Rosethorn13561
2006-04-30 . chapter 8
Please finish the story!!...I love it...great job..one of my favorite house fics!
PreppieKhmerGal
2006-04-23 . chapter 7
Oh I hope they get those...well you know, bad guys!
AtreidesHeir
2006-04-22 . chapter 7
sitting up with me all night wasn’t good for his marriage six years ago. I’m not leaving

Excellent line. This is a sad story. I LOVE IT! I also like the part about the officer returning the coin. I actually said "AWW" out loud and everything..LOL Keep up the good writing.
AtreidesHeir
2006-04-22 . chapter 2
Poor Wilson, hitting the wall. House is going to have to fix him up. Hopefully the drinks will make him feel better. But judging by where I think you're going with this, I don't think they are going to help all that much. Good job so far.
AtreidesHeir
2006-04-22 . chapter 1
"You know The O.C. is on tonight"
and the whole scene of Wilson recalling House and his allergies was really funny and totally in character. I am intrigued.
Klashfor
2006-04-22 . chapter 7
*voice cracks* You make Wilson better, ya hear?! Its so cute and sad. :-(
-K
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