Wait! I don't understand he says shes a rabbit- yet not a rabbit for she is in human form or whatever so...which one is it. doesin't this tale resolve around kiba being a wolf and her being a rabbit?

Wow! very interisting, But- don't take this wrong but i think the girl should be more stronger in attutude for, it's a pity to see her like this, but other then that it was...GREAT.

I think it was UN BELIEVABLE, in a good way, It's interisting to find out how this turns out, keep writing.

lol so cutte!

Aw... I love this story. I'm glad you updated... So update soon!

I love it!

Aw he fainted! ADORABLE ADORABLE ADORABLE!

I mean, in real life if that ever happened to me I'd be scandalized, but reading about it is tender. :-)

I was thinking about this story. glad you updated. 30 stories? Are you really working on that many at once?

this rocks and it so funny pleaz write more soon

hey, it's me again. i just saw in the first chappie's author notes that u mentioned usagi was like chii, so just scratch that comment from my previous review. that's what i get for not reading ;

i liked this chappie. usagi kinda reminds me of chii from chobits with her referring to herself in third person and all. anyway pretty please update soon

o poor Kiba! Mm, trix. I want some! very good. continue!

I love it please up date asap!

How like Hige to hit on a prety girl... _-

I just thought of something, how about if Usa bumps on Blue? I hope she also comes to be in this story, she's definitely the best Wolf's Rain female character, in my humble opinion... I can imagine Blue acting as Usagi's bodyguard... perhpas she could even be the reincarntion of one of the senshi!

I don't know why, but I see her kinda with some likeness to Rei (that is, manga Rei. NOT anime Rei...). She has Rei's passionate and fiery personality, and also the oddly flickering kind of detachment she sometimes shows in the manga.

I would love if Usa were to find some of the senshi, though. I can see Toboe taking a liking to Hotaru: she kinda looks like Leara... and Tsume and Minako would make an interesting couple too, if it's true that opposites do attract: a bubbly girl and a quiet man, a leader and an exile... (Minako is the leader of the inner scouts while Tusme was banished from his pack for running away and leaving them behind when they were being chased by hunters)

That was just a thought.

Hope to read chapter three soon!

aw! i lurve this story so far! I've never seen an ooc usagi that i liked till now. its all like "chobits" kind of and freaking adorable!