too bad! cliffhanger! and this was written some years ago, but don't mean I can't leave a friggin review! pretty good so far!

Write more *dies* It's short, but all my chapters are short too and I know how hard it is to find time to write. XD I forgive you.

Write more anyway!

O_O Why is it stopping? You're gonna make me cry *sniffle*. This is really sweet and you need to write more. ...plz...?

*blinkblink* well durn... this is interesting, more please?

Great story! Very suspensful...I can't wait to read the finished thing!

AH! Really, really, really good! I love it so far. I can't wait until ch. 4 is out. And whadda ya mean you've been reading too many Anne Rice books? That's impossible. There's no such thing as too much Anne Rice. Anyway, I really liked your story and hope you write more soon.

-T'suko the Altoid Addict

Cool, this is pretty good, its confusing at the moment, but I kinda like not knowing what's happening, since I will in the future, and I can anticipate... Anyway, I like this, and i hope you write more soon :)

*is in shock* you just... left it there! *dies* you... you... arg... *sighs* please hurry up with the next part? I can't get enough Seph/Cloud stuff! _

O.O oh my... pleasepleasepleaseplease hurry out with a new part! this is SO good...

it's good so far, but where's the rest? i want to see what happens!

hey i jus wanna say that your fanfic so far looks pretty good. i must say it has great potential as long as you don't get sloppy later on like some writers tend to do. well hope you finish the next few chapters soon bye for now.

-bill

So far, pretty interesting. Hope to see the next chapter soon. I really like this story. Bye for now!

And the plot thickens _ Well, not a lot, but it's getting there hehe. You seem to be very good at Cloud's point-of-veiw. It's really hard to understand that boy sometimes, but I think you've done a great job so far. Keep writing :)

Please continue. I know there aren't many reviews and that can be a little daunting but I really would like to see where this ficcy is going to go. I really did like it. Not like the other meet-in-dreams fics.

I love how it's written from Cloud's point of view!