“Why don’t you ask him?” Sands snapped. “I’m not the ** Yellow Pages. I don’t have all the answers.”
hahaha I laughed for like a whole minute *wipes laughing tear* that was rich.
I love it so far!

"I'm here to kill you."
"Why"
"Why not?"
hahahahahaha I loved that I totaLLY did not expect it to be dream I thought it was real. You caught me off guard, great job not alot of people who right dream scenes can do that. You are talented!

I love Sands says “Just look at all the innocent people in here. Why, some of them might even accidentally bump into one of my bullets.”
it's like well then those people should get the hell out of the way!
This is so awesome I love it.

I have listened to that song and have had it stuck in my hand. I hate it. I would much rather have Sweeney Todd stuck in my head.
Well, the CD got stolen when my no good x-bf parked in the wrong spot at the wrong time and some fking idiot got the cd.

course, I can't complain seeing as how that ** hole only got three of my CD's and two of them were on my I-pod all ready, well not the OUATIM. But he got around thirty of my x's CD's and those are the rare anime ones you can only get on line for like thrirty some odd dollars.

Oh well, but I do love that song.

Nicely done as always. This is very interesting.

Um. okey-doke. I am a bit confused. In a gun fight I think El could get away from Sands if he really wanted too.

Nice shoot out. I liked it.

All right, its time for the big fking number. Yayness!
Have you noticed that we can write the f-bomb into the story but can't do it in the review? weird, ain't it?

Sands seems to know what he's getting into.
I hope he likes dirt with his dasies.

I'm way behind (understatment!) in my fic reading and have just read this for the first time. As always, you've done an excellent job. It took me several evenings of reading before bed (and then this afternoon) to finish this and I went to sleep each evening wondering what was going to happen next. I love how you can make the events at the end be believable. It's not something the characters would have ever expected at the beginning of the story but when they finally arrived there - well, how else could it have ended? Thanks for posting this one!

I cant say anything but...WOW! This story is amazing! How you ever made it?! I love it!!

I love that way you have written it down. It was very interesting to read about Sands' and El's thoughts. I love the movie and the characters so it was very fun to read what would have happened after the original story. Your plot is very genious and the characters are just like in the movie. Well, maybe I don't see El just like you but we all have our views.

You gave me wonderfull hours! Thank you! And I don't mind if you will write more about our friends... :)

Kiwi

i am so HAPPY i've found a good writer with good stories. i could read all your stuff (and i think i've read a few already) you are very talented. you had Sands and El's characteristics and thoughts down pat.

i added it to my favorites!

Aw this story is so good! and i like the fact that Sands wanted to elude El to his blindness, he'd come off as weak. i love Chiclet so much for his loyalty, but really, let's get that boy a more suitable name!

damn i wish it was 2AM here, gotta sleep and read more later. ta for now.

Hi

I just finished reading a couple of your OUATIM-based stories and just wanted to say how much I enjoyed them. You have a wonderful way with words and you keep the characters true to themselves.

Well done!

Finally finished reading, and I loved every word of it. I like it how I never know where you are going with the story, and how you manage to bring so many plot twists while keeping the characters in character (sorry for my English). Your characterization is excellent. I really hope "the muse strikes again" and you'll write a sequel to it one day (preferably soon).

I like the peace with which you ended this, Archuleta in jail, Sands independent again, and the understanding between Sands and El. It's amazing that they could come to such an understanding after the violence of the first half of the story, but you made it real :)