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Kyuubi666
2009-12-02 . chapter 4
wow, split persona or something?
Robinwing14
2009-08-21 . chapter 9
Oh man, when Naruto tricked Sakura and Ino into killing Sasuke...MAN, THAT WAS FRIGGIN' EVIL!! Also evil when Naruto killed Kakashi and forced Sakura to ask him out! TEAM 7 BASHING IS AWESOME!! WRITE MORE SUFFERING!!
joe1402
2009-03-16 . chapter 1
good 1st ch
Pub-blue92
2009-03-03 . chapter 1
Aha theres nothing like a good bashing fic. Good job.
anemix
2009-03-01 . chapter 10
Your story is amusing. It is very fun to watch all the people who where mean to Naruto get beaten up. I think Naruto gave up too easily to Kyuubi though. He didn't even try to stop Kyuubi from killing his friends. Naruto is also too powerful. Even with Kyuubi, Naruto defeated the Hokage and Kakashi too easily. At the very least it should have taken longer and Naruto would have had to call upon more of the Kyuubi's powers and somewhat transformed. Even with the Red Cloud Jutsu, Naruto took care of the Hokage way too quickly and easily. All in all, your fic is amusing and dark, though not that serious.

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BUNNY

PS- because of a glitch, I had to rewrite this whole thing from memory because it wouldn't send
naruhina124ever
2009-02-11 . chapter 9
WHE!!
naruhina124ever
2009-02-11 . chapter 3
YAYZ!
Tri-Emperor of The Twilight
2008-10-28 . chapter 9
Such beautiful suffering.
ashley
2008-01-18 . chapter 10
i hate this story so much im taking it out of my favorites since sakura and sasuske died
ashley
2008-01-18 . chapter 9
that was horrible i thout everyting was back to normal
narutodippy
2007-12-28 . chapter 10
OMG! This is the best story ever!
narutodippy
2007-12-28 . chapter 2
Naruto beating Sasuke to a pulp and metaly tormenting Sakura...

MARRY ME!

lol Jk, but that is difinetly entertaining
money apple
2007-07-30 . chapter 5
its spelled jutsu
62635377
2007-07-20 . chapter 5
man, I so know what Naruto means, most women are stubborn, but that makes their charm so much more alluring(not trying to sound sick or anything, but it is true)
62635377
2007-07-20 . chapter 4
ou are truly an evil genius.
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