loved it! You're right; Mattie lived with Harm long enough to have gone through some important mile stones in her life.

Aw, another good chapter, although I am really confused, b/c the first chapter was AFTER shopping and this one IS shopping...Whatever. Wow, I cannot believe Mattie's friend Linda. Holy crap. Anyways, yeah. Keep writing! :)

Man, this is one of those fics where there's tons of angst and it's all, "I love her but she doesn't love me," and the other person really DOES, and you're screaming for them to just get together the whole time...Anyways, yeah, I like the idea here. Nice. Keep writing! :)

great story.

aw I love it!! it's wonderful!!

the end? no way! it's a good story, but it could be developed so much further. Please don't end it here? give your story a chance to grow and blossom and... eek. where did that language come from? in any case, i like this story. Please keep it going? :o)

The end?!?!?!?! And you kind of just leave us hanging there. Sometimes, though, I guess that's a good thing for us readers. I did absolutely love this chapter though, so great job!

That was a great fic. I do hope you're going to do a sequel. I love Harm/Mac & Mattie fics.

Love,

Lynn
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argh, the torment.. nice chapter, but you just left me hanging onto your words hoping desperately that i'd be able to see harm's reaction to mac before the chapter ends, but alas.. it wasn't meant to be.. i like this story.. it's definitely very sweet, and has the potential for so much drama that i'm eager to read every word.. please update soon? :o)

I love it! Please continue nobody writes enough about Harm & Mattie stories, so yes ever onward!

Great chapter. Trust Webb to turn up. Hope Harm/Mac get it together. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Love,

Lynn
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Please continue! But if you could pretty please make Webb go away for good! (I have an extremely strong dislike for that man!)Great job!
MAC AND HARM FOREVER!
JAG FOREVER!

*kills webb*...I love this chapter!! the dress sounds beautiful!! I can't wait for Harm's reaction!! Update soon!

Absolutely loved the first chapter! This one was even better...too bad Webb showed up. Love where this is going though, keep it coming!

Good story.. but is this a stand-alone chapter? or will you be updating and continuing the story? I hope so because I'd really like to see what happens between the three of them. but i'm a bit confused.. mac pettitioned the courts to allow him to have mattie? is that how harm got her back? or is this temporary? this story's great. update soon? :o)