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Reviews for: Pack Mentality
Leonahari
2009-08-03 . chapter 1
Fantastically written!
silenced lambs
2006-02-13 . chapter 1
A fantastic piece of writing, from an extremely unusual point of view. I loved the way you drawn the parallels between the Turks and a pack of wild animals, which is probably exactly how Hojo views them. Hojo's bitterness really comes through, and gives one the shivers, to see the visceral hatred he has for the Turks.

By the way, I don't know if it's stylistic, but the usual convention in the line,

"Professionals", you say.' Normally there's a full stop, not a comma. Unless it's a stylistic feature that I missed.
Kitara
2005-10-03 . chapter 1
Woah... I like it. Good job.
TruebornChaos
2005-09-28 . chapter 1
Interesting. Figured it'd started with Vincent.
The Tiramisu Of Impending Doom
2005-09-27 . chapter 1
Ah, a different view of the Turks, and I really liked the biting descriptions in here. It's always interesting to read from Hojo's point of view...
Nando the RPS King
2005-09-27 . chapter 1
Interesting perspective.
JA-Japster
2005-09-27 . chapter 1
That was brilliant. It captured Hojo's personality perfectly, and the long rant made me smile. Very nice piece of writing, full of description and I loved the parallel you draw between the Turks and dogs. Good stuff!
Sulphurya
2005-09-27 . chapter 1
Wow...!
That was... so cool!
The comparisons were brilliant, and you can really feel Hojo's distaste for the Turks!
As much as I love the boys in blue, this made me wonder if the snooty scientist might just be right...?
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