 silenced lambs 2006-02-13 . chapter 1A fantastic piece of writing, from an extremely unusual point of view. I loved the way you drawn the parallels between the Turks and a pack of wild animals, which is probably exactly how Hojo views them. Hojo's bitterness really comes through, and gives one the shivers, to see the visceral hatred he has for the Turks.
By the way, I don't know if it's stylistic, but the usual convention in the line,
"Professionals", you say.' Normally there's a full stop, not a comma. Unless it's a stylistic feature that I missed. |