I'm sorry... I just have something in my eye... it's a tear... oh, there's more... yeah... I'm crying... that was just sad... sad and a little beautiful at the end... the constant n-word usage made me rather uncomfortable though...
What's Fat Albert? I've never heard of it in my entire life. Honest!
dark phantom 2009-03-19 . chapter 1
9 down 1 up good bye
sue 2006-12-09 . chapter 1
this was... beautiful!
very moving, i've never read anything like it, and it's most likely fairly accurate to what their live would have been like.
nice work.
query4 2006-03-11 . chapter 1
Extremely moving. A wide spectrum of emotion is displayed: fear, regret, nostalgia, anger, shame. I felt sorry for Albert, and both angry and sorry for Donald. Simply written, but very emotional. A great job.
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