oohh these were really good, really powerful well done.

Wowie! That was so great. Love how you have 6 different points in his life. This is definitely one of your best.

It's a beautiful story. I like the way you putted Nickleback's songs in it.especially the last chap/song. The song totaly conect withe the story. I'm definaly going to read on of you're other story's!

Luvz Sue-AnneSparrow