 Shunatsu 2009-07-18 . chapter 1Aw... I loved it! It was so wonderfully sweet of Minato and you portrayed all of them really well, especially young Kakashi and Obito! |
 Niabi 2009-05-15 . chapter 1Aww, how cute! Minato's so sweet. Sort of. He is kidnapping his students, after all. Oh well. I'm sure they'll all get over it eventually. :)
Kakashi's, Obito's, and Gai's personalities really suit them. I like the fact that Gai broke into Kakashi's apartment. And that Minato had to explain the concept of 'breaking and entering' to him, even though he's not Gai's sensei.
Basically, I enjoyed the entire story! Nice job! |
 beautifulyellowflame 2009-04-18 . chapter 1I love it!! please make another chapter! rocking story! |
 Convexbaka 2007-12-27 . chapter 1Story is so good like all your other writing. I hope I'll find your writing when you publish in the real world. :D |
 Eldr-Fire 2007-07-10 . chapter 1Aw, I really liked that one. The stuff with Gai was hilarious, and I liked how you managed to slip a bit of what could be considered angst in between the lines. The stuff with Yondy was kinda meh, but I thought you ended it nicely. Reading little spats between Obito and Kakashi like that makes me re-consider some of the supposed coldness Kakashi showed Obito in Gaiden.
Cheers!
~Eldr |
 vincents1lover 2007-06-09 . chapter 1I read this yesterday...witch was my b-day. That just made me laugh. |
 ninbunny alchemist 2007-03-10 . chapter 1that was good keep up the good job |
 no name 2006-12-01 . chapter 1 LOL! Cute! |
 KitKat 2006-11-23 . chapter 1 Needs to be an episode of Naruto! Make a sequel out of this one! I love how Obito and Kakashi fight all the time! Cute and adorable story! Loved it! Laughed hard! Thanks! |
 StarDancer1234 2006-09-29 . chapter 1LMAO! |
 Author of Doom: Rin 2006-09-02 . chapter 1I know everybody else said it, but oh, what a bad future Hokage! |
 ShinigamiLenne 2006-08-12 . chapter 1Lol Gai is such an idiot. But a funny one at that :D Hahaha what a bad future Hokage! xD Kidnapping his students... LOL |
 openwindow 2006-08-02 . chapter 1AHAHAHAAHAHAHA!! I ADORE teeny kakashi!!
(he'd probably hate me, though, because i'd fawn over him...he's just too CUTE!!)
XD |
 rivendellelve 2006-07-23 . chapter 1cute! I really like the end *g* |
 joyceeee 2006-02-23 . chapter 1Haha, loved the ending of this. Funny and well-written, good job! |