 Unedited Creativity 2007-07-21 . chapter 3Nice! Aside from some grammar and spelling mistakes that was great! Added it to my favs! |
 pepsilexxi 2006-11-24 . chapter 3please update soon! |
 emmson82 2005-12-04 . chapter 3Awesome story you have here, keep it up!! |
 hello heartbreak 2005-10-29 . chapter 3The "bed scene" was incredibly sweet. Love the ReTi interaction! Update quickly! ^_^ |
 Kyoy Valentine 2005-10-23 . chapter 3Another great chapter! Looking forward to the next, update soon! |
 Vincent Hetfield 2005-10-20 . chapter 3Man, that was too funny, Reno putting cereal in front of here after destroying her kitchen lol. And another thing, finally saw Advent Children, my friend got it off e-bay, but its in japaneese with english subtitles, still the best movie ever, so I wouldn't mind anything from AC in the next chapter. |
 scorpion05 2005-10-20 . chapter 3sneaky little bastard *grin* - he was awake the whole time... if only tifa knew ^^
but it was so cute when he pretendet to sleep... *squeal*
reno trying to cook was really sweet! (i'd kill him too if he'd destroyed my kitchen!)
Can't wait for the next chapter! |
 Lucien's Angel87 2005-10-19 . chapter 3 Very cute with Reno's arms wrapped around. Heck, who would in their right minds rufuse Reno? Anyways I like the way the story is progressing. Update Soon! |
 Arabian-Pigg 2005-10-19 . chapter 3Wonderfull Chapter !! I love it !! Its just so Cute !! I cant wait 'till the nezt Chapter !!
Oh Yeah, Thanks for letting me know whats Fukanou is, it is fit I say...
Anyway Update Pleease ! |
 Starlight-Dagger 2005-10-18 . chapter 3Hm... interesting story...It's pretty well written though there are several spelling errors, might wanna watch that! ;D |
 Sugihara 2005-10-18 . chapter 3Wha... that is so typically Reno... to feign sleep... I really enjoyed this chapter... but I'm not sure, sometimes a spellcheck just isn't enough (had the same problem with this...) maybe, you should find a beta reader, just like I did. So you can make sure that you get rid of all mistakes. No offense meant, though. ^^ I really like this story. |
 Alexia Alexendra 2005-10-18 . chapter 3Omg it's not bed but beg. DAH Stupid keyboard!! (in my last review XD)
Well, that chapter was really funny. It look like it's coming from a episode un a anime. XD *Tifa punch Reno and he fly in front for her door* XD
Anyways, keep writing :D |
 babyboo777777 2005-10-18 . chapter 3reno cooking?? **screams hysterically** damn! luv it !! update update update PLEASE!! |
 Nando the RPS King 2005-10-17 . chapter 3Cute chapter, reading it brought a smile to my face. Keep up the excellent work. |
 Sugihara 2005-10-05 . chapter 2I like this story pretty much... I don't care that much about some mistakes as long as it is still readable. So, you don't need to worry too much, I think... I know it's not too easy to write in a foreign language, I make some mistakes myself... and every time I read through my story, I still find some -_-
The movie doesn't encourage a ReTi (since they talk to each other on the phone, they don't interact otherwise, not that I could remember it - and I've seen it at least four times ^^)... but when you see Tifa and Reno there... they just hit you. ^^ Advent Children gave me new ideas for my story, though it is pretty AU now, but who cares?
OK, enough babbling... Actually I just wanted to say that I liked reading this story and I can't wait to read more. ^^ |