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| Falcon Horus 2005-12-30 ch 1,  | abuseYeah, that's not much of a story...I could see more or do we leave that up to the imagination of the readers? Anyway, lovely piece of writing. |
| ChristalSteele 2005-09-28 ch 1, | abuseA very good story nice job. |
| fififolle 2005-09-28 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I wish the show would let these two share more 'Leaders conferences' on the balcony, haha! Poor Elizabeth. Teyla needs to continue - or Elizabeth and I won't believe her ! Only kidding, this was very sweet, but please, more, please. |
| EclecticTrekker 2005-09-27 ch 1, | abuseWow! Such a beautiful moment. If only the writers could figure out how to put this kind of thing in the actual show! |
| JazzyMcWier 2005-09-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was nice. It's good to see friendship things and the walls breaking down. Nice job. :-) |
| Miran Anders 2005-09-27 ch 1, | abuseNice! I really enjoyed this... it's a good relationship to explore. Both women, both leaders, both dealing with doubters in the ranks... very nicely done. Short and sweet. Thanks! -Miran |
| PurpleYin 2005-09-27 ch 1, | abuseI liked this show of friendship but I don't want it to end there, I'd love to see an extended version of it. |