I love this story!! Its sad..but its very nice, he died because she stabbed him too hard right?

*cries* this is so sad!
BUT!
I love it!

It seems to me like during a person's last moments of life they completely reverse their personality - Yzak seemed to become caring so quickly, like he realized that he didn't need to act tough to Fllay - she was scared enough already.

Well done, I loved this fic, YzakxFllay is my second favourite GSEED couple! I love how Fllay uses her wicked sexiness to get what she wants. Well written, it was very sad but somehow peaceful.

wow, that was really good but at the same time really sad.

That was...odd. But I liked it. :) Was this the idea you mentioned last time we chatted? Or is that still to come?