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J Plash 2008-10-01 ch 1,	abuseThe mood of sleep was wonderful, and you caught the tension between Soubi's evading Ritsuka's orders and his desperate need for them really well. The image of Ritsuka's tail constantly brushing Soubi, making contact, was beautiful. Your take on Soubi's thoughts about parts of his past was fascinating, and the way he only half sort of talked about it was very much in character. The only thing that marred it for me was that I can't imagine Soubi being that tired off 2 hours sleep a night. I frequently do 3 or 4 days without sleep, or weeks on 2 hours a night, and Soubi has a very high level of endurance and control. So it seemed odd for him to lose control over that little. That's only a small crit, though :) Great fic :D
0928soubi at docomo.ne.jp 2008-08-22 ch 1,	abuseAw, that was touching as only Soubi the Masochist can make it! ;) Nice fic. ~.~
lampshaded 2008-03-17 ch 1,	abusei love it! it's excellently written, great work.
Amorpheous 2008-02-14 ch 1,	abuseThis a cute fic, but at the same time there us deoth and philosophy that really adds to it. It's very beautiful and all the time now, I see myself identifying with characters like Soubi, Ritsuka from Loveless, Yuki, from Fruits Basket, Tokuto from Full Moon o Sagoshite. I don't know. This has inspired me to write a fic basedon what it means to be true to yourself. I loved this! Not many could have explained the need for physical pain as good as you have, and you also put it in the words of one of my favourite snime/manga characters. Awesome! ~ Oni
omgahitsbritt08 2008-01-24 ch 1,	abuseI am a few years off lol. I really liked loveless. I liked how you wrote this fanfic even though it was only one chapter.
Hrafna 2007-12-02 ch 1,	abuseSuch a nicely written, cute piece of work! I love the image of the scenery, Soubi dozing halfway on the bed and Ritsuka doing his homework. ^-^ Like these little gestures of affection (especially Ritsuka's cicid tail .). Very interesting subject, has something philosophical to it, and I guess you have a point there. Tha~aanks for this one!
hollowmoon 2007-10-05 ch 1,	abusepretty good story.do another
Raserei Hojo 2007-06-25 ch 1,	abuseTwo years old, and still one of the best one-shot Loveless stories I've read. I love reading about people sleeping (I'm weird, I know) so this was like heaven for me. XD; Thanks for writing this!
L-Zakuro 2007-03-16 ch 1,	abusei loved this story, very believable and well written. PS: Sorry about the last review i gave. I'm as tired as Soubi. yours was the one i read ROFL
CrymsonTear 2007-02-12 ch 1,	abuseSoubi is such a freaking MASOCIST! lol HA HA HA I liked this! ^_^ Great job Cheers Crmy
DarkMiko13 2007-02-02 ch 1,	abuse...WOW! THIS WAS SOO DEEP. I LOVED IT. WISH IT WASNT A ONE SHOT
Red Kitsune Flames 2007-01-27 ch 1,	abuseDid he bite him or not? Excellent fic.
bellabrochol 2006-10-09 ch 1,	abuseA-W-E-S-O-M-E! That was such a cute piece of writing. I mean, it's just... wonderful. Great portrayal of their characters. Grammar and punctuation -wise is wonderful too!
Spinereader 2006-09-14 ch 1,	abuseOne year and only 9 reviews. It seems the good stories always get overlooked. Everyone is so perfectly in character! Especially Soubi with his weird masochistic streak. Am I right in inferring that you didn't think Soubi's first time was that pleasent? I've only seen the anime so for all I know the manga may alude to this, but from the anime I always got the impression it was probably with Ritsu-sensai and none too special.
Lady Dusk -Raku- 2006-08-02 ch 1,	abuseI'm ashamed i haven't reviewed this before. Your characterization and detail in the shot was so well done. Not to mention the contents of convo and elsewise had me as interested as the two were in each other's opinion. But still, the fact that I could so see this conversation in Loveless going on, gives me the conclusion in that you're a genius for this. ^ ^ I 100% enjoyed it.

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