God, you nailed the period details to perfection. As always, sad to see an abusive Jean-Paul but so unusally sensitive for you to follow up with such heartfelt warmth and tenderness and all around fluffiness.:)Your treatment of Alisa was sensitive and well defined; characters with disabilities can easily be made into charicatures - and she most definitely in not. Easy to see Remy being the knight in shining armor. All around - so unlike you but such a welcomed change of pace and i can only hope for more of the same!

XO ~ drae

This is very very good but also very sad in spot. I liked the way you had Remy be concerned and look at his sister.

This is a good character study. I was very touched by Remy's devotion to his sister. Her needs are nothing to him because of his ability to love her. Nicely done.