|Reviews for The Moment|
| bec 1/22/13 . chapter 1
Great job.I wish there was more.
| themis.ceres 5/24/12 . chapter 1
I love this SO much! You did such a great job of sketching out his character development.. I have to admit I especially loved the 'twist' at the end, such a great way to drive it all home!
| Xtin2000 6/28/11 . chapter 1
wow this was beautiful... you've captured the moment, wonderful work
| cirana 8/30/07 . chapter 1
| Dragonland 2/1/06 . chapter 1
Wow. I thought it was delightful. The evolution of Daniel's character has been plauging me, but I seem to think he is fufilling the position of Jack in most aspects of the team. Good stuff.
| Kiwi4624 12/28/05 . chapter 1
omg... i got this alert a while ago but i didnt get around to reading it... i love it...
| LadyLefaye 12/3/05 . chapter 1
Interesting fic. I thought the last line really brought everything all together.
| SG-Fan 10/14/05 . chapter 1
Now, I just have to catch up on your.. three other fics?
| Mackenise Jackson 9/30/05 . chapter 1
Oh my god, WOW. Really I don't know what to say, it's just WOW. It really came home to me reading that. thank you for sharing such a great piece of writing.
| Beckthter 9/29/05 . chapter 1
Wow... I haven't seen the episode yet, but that short story hit me in the gut.
I can't put my finder on it.
| Evilclone 9/29/05 . chapter 1
| Beatrice Otter 9/28/05 . chapter 1
Nice story. Well written, good idea, all that.
The problem is that Daniel was never a pacifist. He was never the first to go for weapons, preferring to find a more peaceful solution, but even back on the first mission to Abydos, once it became clear that negotiations weren't an option he had no qualms about violence, and less problems with arming the natives than Jack. He had obviously used a gun before (handguns being notoriously difficult to aim). He wasn't a pacifist, he just wasn't a militarist.
Also, you might want to add the ep "Beast of Burden" to Daniel's list of times when he might have changed. That's when Chaka was captured and used with those other Unases as slaves, and Daniel freed them so they could start a rebellion. Jack and Sam were surprised over the fact that he wasn't even interested in negotiations, by the time they'd escaped.
| Nighshae 9/28/05 . chapter 1
You're right, except for the ending, that episode was a real yawner. What we haven't figure out yet is how Daniel got through the other door, given how much effort Mitchell, Teal'c and the others had to use to get through the first one.
| trtlsoup2001 9/27/05 . chapter 1
O... angsty. And good. And what I was thinking as I was watching Prototype. Only you put it in words much better than how I thought of it.