*applauseapplauseapplause*

Ah, wonderful!

is that the end? so confused... is there a prequel i missed? how is the game linked to that world? who the hell is tabber? As for the mythic allusions, ^^ good job. As far as i know the heart is equal to the feather, it is neither lighter or heavier on the scales. (but i could be wrong ^^) Great style. post more soon!

Hmm...

That is all I can say for now. :)

oh post more soon cant wait to read more!

Curious, very curious.

Happy writing!

hm, this is getting interesting, i'm trying to place it in this universe, is it after battle city? or what? cant wait to read more post more soon!!

w00t! Update! And I'm reviewing on time, for once. XD

Great, awesome, sweet, super cool, and OMFGIFREAKINGLOVEYOURFICSYOUROCK!

So yeah, keep up the great work. ;D

Wow! this is really cool! I love how you wrote this! Silence is a very interesting charecter, although confusing as are Tabber, Harti, and Sibby. Are they good guys or bad guys?? Is Atem the key to getting out of the game or is he just part of the plot at the moment? Darn I guess I'll have to wait, Update soon if you can please!!

Soda is good

Really liking this so far. YAY, NO MARY-SUE's! Well, from what I can tell anyway.

Curiosity. I am looking forward to Drayce's interaction with the others.

Keep it up!

im so confused...post more soon!!

hmm, wowies you update so fast! i cant wait to see more, so are the "other six" them? are they trapped in the game, assumming it is a game. post more soon! i'm dying to know whats going on!

is this like wings of leaves but marik decided to pull someone in? THAT would be intense, especially since drayce doesnt seem like someone to be messed with. is she blind? please post more soon!!

Another awesome fic in the works I see. Keep it up!

this is getting interesting, is she still in the game? what happened to the control room guys? are they freaking out about not being able to reach her? great job! please post more soon!

was that guy yami malik? interesting please post more soon!! i like the application of RPG rules and strageties in how she's playing the game, cant wait for more !! ^^ great job!