Okay I'm finally here to review. I'm really sorry that I'm not reviewing the rest of the story.

Loved this one as much as the 1st one. It was fully sick mate. I love the hell long cahpter's it keeps me quite busy hehe. Kakashi is so kool, he really needs a gf...Lol and I'm glad someone in the world gave him that, even if it is a fan fic. You are a great writer you know that? If you didn't well you are ^__^

Well I have to go now. I'm sorry, I feel really bad that I didn't review all the chapter's -__- I'm a bad reviwer! Oh well.

Cya around mate

I read your first story, Romantic Antics and I loved it! I love this one so much. It made me laugh, cry and angry at certain characters. I was so into it! This has to be one of the absolute best fanfictions I've read.

AW SO SAD... great ending gal ^^ I can't wait for troublesome romance ^^

hope it'll be as good as this story

*glomp*

Neko-chan

Yes! It has been resolved. I really like this. It was... bittersweet, which I think is a great quality with your writing. I thought that the ending wasn't very conclusive, but I can definitely see a sequel to this. It was a bit confusing in some places, but I think what really bothered me was that the Sasu-Saku-Naru triangle is still unresolved. I realized something a bit ago, but if you're not certain about how you want the story to work, a reader can tell. I guess what I'm trying to say is that you need to decide.

On another note, I remeber that you once said that Kirara is not meant to be a **, but I think that when you write her, if you add a bit more of her perspective, she could come across as less..cold and heartless. I think that she's not a very likeable character, since, this story is in 3rd person, which should be objective, fails to expand on her own personal struggles.

Please don't be hurt/offended by anything I say. I tend to be a bit of a harsh critic, but despite that, I really like your writing and I can't wait for the sequel. I think that you made a good decision in cutting this story off; it gives the whole piece more of a saga-like feel. I am really amazed by how well you've stuck with the story. I just started a new Kabuto fic, and I'm having serious trouble continuing... Anyways, keep up the good work!

ja ne,

hanariko

you can't just ending like that. when they finally got back together to. please update soon. PRETTY PLEASE WITH CHERRIES ON TOP!

AMAZING THAT WAS GREat aW i loved it i can't wait for the sequel :):):)::):):)::):):):):):)

~solitarywarrior

Aw... CUTE! Okay, what is it with me and the word cute, so, I'm gonna say, KAWAII! I don't get why it has to sound like Hawaii... -_-;;

I didn't like last part, ebil person trying to make Yui marry someone she won't like... GR... STAY AWAY! Yui belongs to Kakashi!

I'm feeling oh so random today...

Anwyas, great job on your story, can't wait for more, and know that I'll always be right there beside you in the last saga of Romatic Antics!

Update soon!

I love this story I can't wait till the next chapter

Nice! Likey! Sorry for not reviewing soon, I was busy. I keep on meaning to read and review, but I don't seem to get the chance. Also, I have tests coming, ignore that. Keep up the great and wonderful work! Cute! Update really really really really soon!
^_^

Oh i just am sad why i couldn't find this story to read because i LOVE it. it is rare to find stories with Kakashixoc and i just absolutly love the pairing...love it

i have to say this was powerful...i'm surprise you don't have more reviews because this is really great
Your description of Yui melt down was great and i really do love it. i almost cried...okay i did but it was great..it pulled a string in my heart plus update..please puppy face omg o my i love it

Sad chapter, but great ending!! i feel like i'm about to cry! KAKASHI CAN'T DIED OK !
PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

*wah*
It's so sad! Don't let Kakashi die!

YAY! YOU UPDATED! I'm so happy you thought of me! so goodly written...so emotionful. (Conscience: Hanariko is too happy to use real words, so please bear with her)I really liked how you closed it all up. I think you really clarified on the characters and their emotions without overdoing it, so good job!

I'm so happy that the cliffie's over. Now. time for me to predict/advise. There will be one or two more chapters resolving Kakashi and Yui, their future, and her family (Marriage maybe?)you seemed to have wrapped up the loose ends pretty well. Now we just need Kakashi to get better and for them to kiss and make up. I can totally see a sequel about their life(for example, where will they live? Will Yui abandon her village? Will Kakashi quit and become a mooch? dundundun!)

ANYWAYS about the Narusakusasu triangle... I apologize beforehand, but...

WILL YOU JUST FREAKING MAKE UP YOUR MIND ALREADY? THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!

There is a very important reason for this. Sakura (who I might just be the slightest bit prejudiced against, is starting to gain a **-quality that is really grating. It seems like she is playing with the boys, so maybe try to develop her character a bit more? The lack of decision so far is starting to make the story sound hesitant and unfocused. MY advice, flip a coin--heads, Naruto, tails, Sasuke. If Sasuke wins, have him learn to admit his emotions first and maybe you could try pairing up Naruto with Hinata after Naruto goes into an angst period andhas friendly bonding time with Sasuke, who shows his emotions a bit more? Or, if Naruto wins, try pairing Sasuke with and OC. I dunno, is Yume old enough?

On the otherhand, if you want a darker tone, try having th Rejected One (heheh couldn't resist the capital letters) leave forever, or commit suicide. However, I don't really think that that would fit too well with your story.

The point I'm trying to make is that this story should probably only last for a couple more chapters(like five, six at the most, especially with the length that you're writing. YOur doing a really great job. And since, after being so mean in my review, it's time for some EGo-InFLatINg! ahem... YOU ARE SUCH A AWESOME AUTHOR! I HAVE BEEN FOLLOWING THIS STORY SINCE IT FIRST CAME OUT AND I THINK THAT IT IS AWESOMEFUL BEYOND WORDS! YOU ARE SO CREATIVE AND ORIGINAL, I BATHE IN THE LIGHT OF YOUR MAGNIFICENCE OH MAGNIFICENT WRITING ONE! SERIOUSLY, THIS STORY HAS HAD ME ONE THE EDGE OF MY SEAT, AND EVEN ME, A HARDENED FANFICTION CYNIC HAS DOUBTED WHETHER OR NOT THERE WOULD BE A HAPPY ENDING.

Alright. Now, good job and good luck with your new chapter. I hope my long, poorly written review has helped you somewhat. Or, if it hasn't, has at least taught you something about bad grammer and overcapitalization, as well as the shortlived effects of sugar and tea.

One idea I thought that you might find interesting was if you were to do a parody of a classic (A Farewell to Arms by Ernest Hemingway is brilliant, and fairly short. I reccomend it. Plus, I could totally see Kakashi in it. I simply doubt that i would be able to write, or at least continue a story that would do it justice. I hate resposibility)or incorporate some elements of that into the story, or future stories--it's always a good idea to try and sponge off of another person's creativity and imagination--that's why we have fanfics in the first place :) That's just a tip in case you hit a roadblock. Anyways, feel free to email me if you get stuck too, cuz I'd be more than happy to help, especially if it could speed up the rate that you update. Ja ne, and good work!

I think you were in too much of a rush to update. you have alot of typos towards the end. Anyways..apart from that I like this chapter. Sasuke and Naruto's lil spiff was odd though. It wasn't like Sasuke's character, but anyways...GREAT WORK! Hurry soon.

SAVE YUI! SAVE HER! OMG SAVE HER KAKASHI!