Very gorgeous indeed! *claps* Ahh... if there were only more wonderful Fafner fanfics such as yours... My, that was trully amazing and I loved your descriptions! However, during a certain part of it, I was a little confused at who was talking: Soushi or Tsubaki? But it's interesting either way. Keep up the good work! ~the key of the twilight

A very touching story. Almost pretty, the way your words flow and your images come. And Tsubaki-chan is her usual cuteness, too.

Kudos.

very nice and deep. the italized words just hit you at the end leaving you say "whoa". tsubaki is depicted perfectly: wise, sweet, carefree, child-like. it's really amazing. ^-^