good story...are you going to finish writing it?

o this is great! please, update!! we're all waiting with baited breath!

oh, elita...is she honestly falling for rodimus? just found this while I was skimming, and since i love all of your works just plunged right in. this was really fantastic.

This story has a lot of potential, I am sad to see it seems to be on hiatus. You make me want to try my own hand at Rodimus/Elita and I think I'm going to do just that. :)

I'll say this is a very well-written and intriguing story. Are you going to write another chapter? I wonder, "Will Optimus Prime find out about whats going on between Rodimus and Elita? If so, how will he react? What will Rodimus say to him? What will Elita say?" The story is getting very interesting. I truly think you should write a second chapter. I'm anxious to know what will happen next.