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Reviews For: Out The Window

prettiful pout
2006-11-18
ch 1,
abuseo.O the plan was how that they were going to come out, correct?? I loved the little story though, vera cute :3
Dr FooFoo
2005-10-15
ch 1,
abuseAww, Gregglies. n_n
my wheezy
2005-10-11
ch 1,
abuseAw, hon. I love it so very much. Perfect. I wish, for my own selfish reasons, that it was longer, but drabbles are drabbles, and this is just wonderful.
Ganga-Zumba Palmares
2005-10-10
ch 1,
abuseShort, but cute. I would have liked it better if this was one moment in a longer story, but I wont be picky. The end is, of course, adorable. It's really easy to visualize, so bravo for that. I hope you will continue to write and improve.
Caster
2005-09-29
ch 1,
abuseAw, I love this! There are some drabbles that seem like a waste of 100 words (IE: Where nothing seems to happen) but I love this- it's moving yet short, leaving the reader to think and make conclusions on their own. In other words, you've used 100 words very wisely. I just love your stuff, no matter what! ^_^
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