Yay! It is a rare treat to read a fan fiction to its end. You did well.

creepy. I like it.

hmm intreasting idea here.

*smiles* cool flashbacks! I don't believe I've read any of them before :) Anyway, send me the next chapter if you want (though I'll probably do it after my exams ;) )

~Fey

Intresting and well written. When do the pokemorphs appear?

Very well written.

Very good so far.

Shouldn't this secret base have a higher level of security?
And who's the mystery Pokemon?

Good start. Keep going!