Wow. Absolutely amazing. Definetly on my Favorites.

wow. that was REALLY intense. good job.

YAY! And the croud goes wild! Much more serious and almost poetic in a way but GREAT! Thank you again!

Luv Seraph

Loved it! I think it was a very good portrayal of Sara. Do you think you will continue this? If not, it is great as a one-shot. Keep up the good work!

This was a great story! I especially liked when you had Sara thinking that Michael looked like he doesn't belong in prison because he looks like an artist-NICE:)

Every clear surface had become a canvas for her mind's snapshots of him.

that line was brilliant! summed up what sara was feeling perfectly. i loved how she chastised herself over her feelings for michael and how that made her feel.

chapter 2 soon?

Yay. Pus.

And then there were only 12, 13, 14 other patients before…

Michael's eyes.

...I LOVE THAT! SO CUTE! GREat JOB! I Was waiting for a Prison Break section to pop up! :P

My favorite part...Oh god I'm in love with him. Awesome. This is fantastic. Except for the part where it's the worst idea ever. Michael Scofield, thank god you're alive, because it means I can kill you for this...Great story!

-Austin B.

wow, very nice, please don't make it a one-parter!

LMAO! Sara is just to cute. We feel ya girl, we feel ya. Those damn eyes. I loved this line

"but what he was plotting deep behind those blue-green-gray-beautiful "

Awesome description. His eyes sure got more than one color. They wonder we are so facinated with those damn eyes.

Good job. i enjoyed this very much. You have to write more. Love your writing style

Oh that's good so far. Sad in a way. Michael is mysterious.