 LizbetCrogan 2009-11-01 . chapter 1Hilarious and oh-so-cute! I can just picture everything happening, you wrote it so well. I love it!
I know this is "old" but I just rediscovered it and I had to review. :-) |
 Shunatsu 2009-07-18 . chapter 1Oh GOD this was brilliant! Minato was awesome, and Kakashi was so cute and so much like a kid! I always have splinters from my chopsticks so I can understan his situation XD! Well done! |
 Niabi 2009-05-15 . chapter 1Hah! I loved that! Kakashi's so devious! You portrayed all the Uchiha very well, too. Minato's worrying was also amusing. :)
Thanks for writing this! |
 al3n3a 2009-05-12 . chapter 1Wonderful! Thanks for sharing. =) |
 tati1 2009-04-15 . chapter 1Aw! *laughs*
Adorable. Thank you!
--tati1 |
 premium audrey 2009-01-05 . chapter 1That's so cute!! |
 Qem 2008-12-01 . chapter 1Hee! That's utterly adorable! |
 Anyjen 2008-09-01 . chapter 1That was cute! |
 142010 2008-05-10 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this fic. Very nice.
The only thing I'm confused about is this: why are they using disposable chopsticks? The Uchihas are a powerful family; they would probably use nice, lacquered wood chopsticks. Heck, even poor families and middle class families would use nice chopsticks. My family uses nice chopsticks.
The only people who use the cheap, break-apart kind are poor and/or lazy college students and restaurants. I'm a poor, lazy college student and I have both the cheap kind and the nice kind.
Okay, I realize that little blurb was probably unnecessary. It was a nice fic, it's just the use of cheap chopsticks in such a formal setting bothers me a little. I realize that they were needed for this story, however. :/
Bad manners with chopsticks: stabbing things with them, sucking on them, leaving the tips in the food (when you do this, it's an offering for the dead), crossing the chopsticks, and if you're a girl and hold the chopsticks towards the top it means you'll be an old maid. I'm pretty sure there's more, but these are just the ones that are kinda like the Western equivalent of keeping your elbows off the table, I guess.
Sorry if this review annoyed you. I really did like the fic. Very cute and funny. :) |
 Sairalinde Inwe 2008-01-25 . chapter 1Oh man...the Yondaime ready to pull his hair out while teaching Kakashi table manners...hahahahaha! I loved the ending...Kakashi finally gets his perfectly broken chopsticks! ^.^ go Kakashi! |
 Convexbaka 2007-12-27 . chapter 1I love young Kakashi! He saw underneath the underneath ... or not. ^_~ |
 Renleek 2007-08-17 . chapter 1That was wonderful characterization. The way you were able to bring to life a 9 year-old Kakashi and Yondaime's subtle and undderstanding relationship this way was BRILLIANT.
The writing was wonderful but Kakashi's perfectionism was what sold me completely! I just LOVE how you made him! Chopsticks, huh... |
 Eldr-Fire 2007-07-10 . chapter 1Ha! That one was very good~! I like the way you don't linger on unnecessary details; the transitions from one 'scene' to the next, so to speak, are smooth and timed effectively. |
 vincents1lover 2007-06-09 . chapter 1That was interestimng u should make more like tha. |
 sakura's conscience 2007-05-14 . chapter 1chopsticks! (__)// |