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LizbetCrogan
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
Hilarious and oh-so-cute! I can just picture everything happening, you wrote it so well. I love it!

I know this is "old" but I just rediscovered it and I had to review. :-)
Shunatsu
2009-07-18 . chapter 1
Oh GOD this was brilliant! Minato was awesome, and Kakashi was so cute and so much like a kid! I always have splinters from my chopsticks so I can understan his situation XD! Well done!
Niabi
2009-05-15 . chapter 1
Hah! I loved that! Kakashi's so devious! You portrayed all the Uchiha very well, too. Minato's worrying was also amusing. :)

Thanks for writing this!
al3n3a
2009-05-12 . chapter 1
Wonderful! Thanks for sharing. =)
tati1
2009-04-15 . chapter 1
Aw! *laughs*
Adorable. Thank you!
--tati1
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2009-01-05 . chapter 1
That's so cute!!
Qem
2008-12-01 . chapter 1
Hee! That's utterly adorable!
Anyjen
2008-09-01 . chapter 1
That was cute!
142010
2008-05-10 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this fic. Very nice.

The only thing I'm confused about is this: why are they using disposable chopsticks? The Uchihas are a powerful family; they would probably use nice, lacquered wood chopsticks. Heck, even poor families and middle class families would use nice chopsticks. My family uses nice chopsticks.

The only people who use the cheap, break-apart kind are poor and/or lazy college students and restaurants. I'm a poor, lazy college student and I have both the cheap kind and the nice kind.

Okay, I realize that little blurb was probably unnecessary. It was a nice fic, it's just the use of cheap chopsticks in such a formal setting bothers me a little. I realize that they were needed for this story, however. :/

Bad manners with chopsticks: stabbing things with them, sucking on them, leaving the tips in the food (when you do this, it's an offering for the dead), crossing the chopsticks, and if you're a girl and hold the chopsticks towards the top it means you'll be an old maid. I'm pretty sure there's more, but these are just the ones that are kinda like the Western equivalent of keeping your elbows off the table, I guess.

Sorry if this review annoyed you. I really did like the fic. Very cute and funny. :)
Sairalinde Inwe
2008-01-25 . chapter 1
Oh man...the Yondaime ready to pull his hair out while teaching Kakashi table manners...hahahahaha! I loved the ending...Kakashi finally gets his perfectly broken chopsticks! ^.^ go Kakashi!
Convexbaka
2007-12-27 . chapter 1
I love young Kakashi! He saw underneath the underneath ... or not. ^_~
Renleek
2007-08-17 . chapter 1
That was wonderful characterization. The way you were able to bring to life a 9 year-old Kakashi and Yondaime's subtle and undderstanding relationship this way was BRILLIANT.

The writing was wonderful but Kakashi's perfectionism was what sold me completely! I just LOVE how you made him! Chopsticks, huh...
Eldr-Fire
2007-07-10 . chapter 1
Ha! That one was very good~! I like the way you don't linger on unnecessary details; the transitions from one 'scene' to the next, so to speak, are smooth and timed effectively.
vincents1lover
2007-06-09 . chapter 1
That was interestimng u should make more like tha.
sakura's conscience
2007-05-14 . chapter 1
chopsticks! (__)//
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