Teal'c rocks like a rocking thing. And this description "He had forced her to chase it down a dark alley and whack it with a P90. If that did not work, she went after its children, grandchildren, and second cousins twice removed." is made of win.

I love Sam's reaction at the end - go Carter!

again, Awesome. thanks for the story

I'm glad I found this! I remember reading the first part. It became one of my favorite stories. Now, this second part is a worthy follow up to "Monkey Screaming". It goes deeply into the clones' psyche and there's nothing childish about the writing: it's all finely crafted and insightful. Bravo!

I found this one slightly confusing. Bits didn't really make sense to me, but I loved the last few chapters. they were brilliant in showing the robonding the team was undergoing. Well done!

Nela

Well done. Into the mind and around. Well done.

This is one of my very favourite SG-1/Sam&Jack stories ever. I can't tell you the number of times I have re-read this one. The whole series is good, but this part is definitely my favourite. I can practically feel Alex seething through the pages. Thanks!

Great story...lots of psychological undertones...or maybe just plain tones...and the ending was fantastic! Perfect. But it would have been fun to see a bit more of the professional soldiers' discussion about these teenagers AFTER this little fieldtrip.

Once again well done, I'm enjoying this series of yours immensely!

That was, well that was sweet! Very good, hell it was incredible.

Woah! *still reeling from the brilliance* LOL Gonna read the next one now :D

WOW... I've read this in about two hours... and left me with no more words than that.

This was one hell of an emotionally exhausting story to read, I can barely imagine how it felt to write it.

I have to tell you, you know your stuff when it comes to angst/drama.

I'm moving onto the next part.

this was an awesome story. Now on to the next

LMAO!! This chapter was great! On to the next. nice thing about finding a great story long after it is done, means I don't have to bug you for updates. Don' forget your latest story tho. I will bug you in a week. lol

This is the best mini!fic i have ever read. Really. I am totally in awe of your characters and your skill and the WOWNESS of this fic.

Really.