ah your writings never cease to amaze me ... another amazing story.

Wow...That was just awsome. Wow.

Haunting. I loved how early one you showed Sesshoumaru and Kagome feeling urges to touch soft, smooth, rough, hard, whatever things. There was something very sensual about that, about their externalizing their inner yearnings in that way. Also adored the part about Sesshoumaru having always been the 'bad man'. Reminded me of that old song by...can't remember.

I love it. The desperation in it is insparing. I felt what they felt for a moment, and I wish I hadn't.