Great, great story. Can't wait to read more! Thank you.

Holy Hannah!

This was a really good story! I know it split from 'canon' but in some ways I liked this branch of SG-1 'reality' even better. Is this story complete, or will there someday be more? Or is it continued in another story I've not yet found? In any case I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed it!

No!

Okay, there is now a chance I'll get to bed at a relativly decent hour, but I'd really rather be staying up reading.

It hurts that there isn't more. Maybe posted somewhere else?

Please?

Its late, I'm tired, drowning in your writing, and I didn't see it coming. Re-reading the first chapter - I should have.

I've have a feeling I'm gonna be up late tonight.

I love the idea that Carter is still in her right mind because she found new ways to blow things up.
This is a very interesting and incredibly well written story. Your character analysis skills are pretty well unparalleled and to be honest, I'm having a really hard time trying to predict where this is going and figuring out what everything means in the big picture, which is really unusual for me and really shows how intelligent the writing is.
I know you haven't updated in a while, but I really look forward to the day when you do, so I hope this is more of a hiatus than an abandonment.

PLEASE UPDATE! I really like this story and want to know how it ends. please don't leave it unfinished!

This is excellent. I love the detail and the subtext and the sense of all the thought and understanding and explanation that went into the Tok'ra psyche and Jack's reaction to them. And the steps he's taking to keep Carter as Carter as possible. I love this. Please continue.

Ok... so not the hugest SG1 fan, so a mite bit lost. But you write it well enough that I'm on board. I'm only really confused at this point as to what actually happened, rather than what IS happening in the story.

I was actually a bit hesitant to start reading, but this is quite fun. Love your Selmak! And a more serious Jack is nice. Plus you have politicking down to an art. Good gods! I noticed it in the Labyrinth fic, too, though I don't think I commented. Minor head explosions at the complexity is quite good, though.

Speaking of the Labyrinth (as I'm too lazy to PM)- now I really want to draw Jareth as a bob/dance/threatening barn owl! I'm trying to figure out how best to do it, and if I can get a photo or video reference... the males look absolutely RIDICULOUS when they try to intimidate. It's like boy band dancing. lol!

I know you have lots of stories going right now and I love each and every one of them! I can only hope that you haven't abandoned this one. You capture everybody so well. I can't wait to see what else you have in store!

I really enjoy your writing style and how you seem to get into the heads of the characters. It looks like you haven't written for a while... too bad as I really enjoy your writing.

update?

I love this fic and find it deeply interesting and original. But I desperately want to know what's going to happen next, and if its ever going to be updated. Also, the title's kinda selling short.

But other than that, forward march and onward to glory and pavlova. Cheers.

Again, awesome story. You have this ability to make cannon turn cartwheels while still making sense. I love that you surprise me at every turn. Thanks for writing and sharing

I have to agree with everyone else and express my sincere hope that you eventually come back to this story and finish it. Or, for that matter, continue writing SG-1 fan fiction. You are without question one of my very favorite writers. Your insight into the characters is spot on and you bring a depth and immediacy to your writing that takes hold and gets tighter with the reading.

Your writing elicits a gut clenching response, a shortness of breath. It's wonderful and feeds the need to read more. I dearly hope you find the time and inspiration to return to this work, but if you don't, I wanted to thank you for what you have written. You are truly gifted.

This is such a fantastic story. I loved Monkeys Screaming so very much, so I have no idea why it took me so long to read this one. In any case, I hope you'll come back to finish it eventually.