I guess if you last updated this fic seven years ago there isn't much hope of your finishing it now...I am gutted! I would love to see how this plays out. I have only just started reading your stuff and I love the complexity of the characterisation and the integrity with which you stick to your take on O'Neill. So, if you ever happen to break both your legs at the same time and need something to fill the months of hospital and rehab, perhaps you'll keep this in mind! In the meantime, thank you for a wonderful story!

And you could have heard a pin drop...

Don't just stop, we need the rest of the story. Great premise, love what you are writing.

Love this story, the interactions of the SG-1 team is delightful and it has a very pleasant for want of nail feel to the whole situation. Hoping it's not abandoned but regardless a very pleasant read.

I know this was posted years ago - but great story. Love to see Jack deal with Sam as tokra.

PLEASE WRITE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

FAST!

ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!can't wait for more! and especially the Sam/Jack-ness

Wait, what? This was way too confusing and interesting for you to have ended it here!

Even when the writers were playing with Jack/Sam I never bought into it. I could see Same with Daniel, with Teal'c, Davis, Dixon, Martouf and even Ba'al but not Jack. Maybe its the Selmak influence, but you almost make me believe. Maybe a few more chapters would complete the convincing?

The history of the Goa'uld makes so much sense. The Ancients were pretty much hazardous to everyone's health.

This story is wonderful. What a new and interesting way to look at the Tok'ra, and Sam without boundaries is badass. PLEASE keep writing. I would love to see where you take this. I mean, really, things just started getting good! Looking forward to an update...

I just started reading this story and I think it's AMAZING! Is it still ongoing?

This last scene is only one of the many reasons this story is totally made of win.

Great, great story. Can't wait to read more! Thank you.

Holy Hannah!

This was a really good story! I know it split from 'canon' but in some ways I liked this branch of SG-1 'reality' even better. Is this story complete, or will there someday be more? Or is it continued in another story I've not yet found? In any case I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed it!

No!

Okay, there is now a chance I'll get to bed at a relativly decent hour, but I'd really rather be staying up reading.

It hurts that there isn't more. Maybe posted somewhere else?

Please?