Neat... you should make them together and run away or something, you know make it a little longer...

Hmm kinky...you have to be one of the best lemon writers ever to grace FF, alot of them are poor, I think I'd say you spoiled me for future lemons cause your so good! lol anywho, great job with this!

This lemon one-shot was your 1st? well it was the beginning of making you a TT legend!

X

That was an incredible story,. Totally original.

I love this, it isnt too often you come across Rob/star lemons.

I cant even begin to comprehend this story. it was so amazing.

Ok...that was just sick and perverted! I wanted to puck! i only read like 3halfs of the story!

Sarah

O... see, i've always started reading this story, but for some reason i kept getting stopped or something, but it's wonderfully written! Please keep writing and never stop!

X

Crimson Black

ooh-la-la... ;)

roobin is so horny'

This is pretty cool.

ok good yet slightly creepy

Good job..and the whole brothel idea was interesting. Though i found the idea of Jinx and Bee kind of disturbing. Anyway...your descriptions are as good as ever, but I think that you should edit just a bit more before you post. Was she still wearing her stockings? Nice job on this one though. Keep writing.

I LUVED IT! IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL! DISGUSTING, BUT BEAUTIFUL! WRITE MORE!

;p

-PRINCESSYUMI44

I really like this fanfic! Good job w/ the characters!

love your story.

I thought when i saw "The White Tiger" it was from Big Trouble in Little China...i love that movie too...my family taped it and i've had it since i've been a little kid...i love this story too...although...extending other chapters about BB/Rae and Cy/Bee/Jinx wouldn't be the worst idea in the world, but i understand if you don't...GREAT FIC...I'm Gonna actually check out more of your stories RIGHT NOW!

your idea of a whore house was amazing. Not only that but a rich and elagant place of Gotham's combined power in one building. i also love how you have set all the characters as if they were normal teens that lived in Gotham city, very clique(cli-shae).