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That was good, keep writting :) i want to hear more! sorry people, but i dont like that song, im not really a rap fan though, plz dont make fun! oh well, all that matters is that i like the story and u should update soon! :) BRAVO, BRAVO!

Nicely done! All three sections were perfectly suited to their characters. I love the way the milkshakes all held such different roles in each. Plus, the chapter titles simply rock!

lol write more!

This was cute! Poor Greg. Guess he shouldn't have brought a milkshake into the lab. :P And now I have that song almost stuck in my head. Not quite, though. ;)

And now the damned song is stuck in my head... I can teach you... but really, I have to charge. Sorry, that's the way it is man...

That was a great story! All the milkshakes sounded so good! Well, exept for that last one. Poor Greggo. Anyway, keep up the good work!

Now I want a milkshake! Great stories!