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sandstar08
2007-10-04
ch 25,
abuse*squeals and can't stop grining*

i love how you didn't make it easy, so when it finally did click (albeit a bit awkawrdly and only with the third little puzzle piece) it made it all the more wonderful.

beautiful story! i liked yoru writing style, the flow, the imagery, the bantering dialogue that captures the essence of the six doctors.

and i liked hudson, in that he is so universally unlikeable that even foreman agreed with house against him. lol.
sandstar08
2007-10-04
ch 22,
abusei Never - repeat Never- review before the end of fics, (i usually only read completed ones..) but i have to say that this is possibly my favorite chapter of house fanfic that i've ever read!

thank you for writing this! *rushes off to read again befor her boss catches her*
brolly501
2007-06-22
ch 25,
abusegreat story really liked it
Alamo Girl
2007-06-07
ch 12,
abuseI'm just going to jump in here mid-read and thank you for not making this yet another of the tired and trite 'House/Cam have one nightstand resulting in her being knocked up' kind of fics. I can't tell you how tired I am of seeing kids being used as a plot crutch between the 'shipped characters, because the author can't think of anything more dramatic to get them together. I really hate "baby/someone gets knocked up" fics.

Anyway, this is really well done. I like that you are keeping House in a simblance of himself, even with Cam back in town. I was a bit of a Cam/House fan in the 1st and 2nd seasons, until recent seasons - which showed me how right he and Cuddy are for eachother, ie House/Cuddy. But I still read the well-written, in character House/Cam fics occationally. And this is one of them. You've sucessfully made Cameron grow into something a little more mature - less coniving and erraticly annoying too, something the writers haven't really done in the show (she's regresed into Slutty McHoebag IMO). So thanks for that too!

And I really like your depiction of House with the kid. I can see House reacting to a 2 yr old this way. Kudoes!

I continue on...
Orchidae
2007-06-05
ch 25,
abuseThis really is one of the best stories I've ever read. Would you please consider to write a sequel?=)
Laila
Limaccia
2007-02-26
ch 25,
abuseWow, I just finished your story. It was incredible! You are definitely a "real writer." Your story is very well written, your use of the the English language is diverse and descriptive, and you capture the characters themselves well. You also won me around to your plot device of Brooklyn NOT being House's child. There are adopted kids in my family, so I appreciate loving someone for who they are, regardless of where or who they came from.
P.S. You realize that, when House adopts her, she'll be "Brooklyn House"?!
Peace is GOODandsoisrent
2007-02-13
ch 21,
abuseI LOVE THIS STORY! It reminds of theose beautiful times of the 1st season. Good times. Thank you for writing probably the only perfectly non-fluffy Hameron fic. It rocks my small house-obsessed world.
Peace is GOODandsoisrent
2007-02-08
ch 14,
abuseYou are BY FAR the best House writer in the world. I'm serious, House actually talks like house. i LOVE you. thank you for making the first good house fanfic.
Peace is GOODandsoisrent
2007-01-30
ch 2,
abuseThank you! Finally a fanfic where house actually talks like house! I don't think I've EVER read an in-character house fic. Thank you, it sounds like a script from an episode. Especially first season house. cameron is good in this 2.i LOVE u.
mishy-mo
2007-01-18
ch 25,
abuseAn Amazing story!

Really beleivable and wonderfully well written.
randominsanity29
2006-07-25
ch 7,
abuseI am on Chapter 7 now and I gotta say...WOWZERS lol. I like how you wrote in it such a way that it is mysterious and keeps you on the edge of your seat, not wanting to read your reviews afraid to get spoiled. Man I am a fan of your stories. Great job. How many more chapters are you going with this? or are you done?
CamFan4Ever
2006-07-10
ch 25,
abuseWow, amazing, simply amazing! I *LOVED* it! Please, please, please write a sqeuel! It's begging for one, I'm begging for one!
evie
2006-07-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseyou are such an awesome writer! i loved this story!
Elisa
2006-06-30
ch 12, anon.
abuseDamn, that was sensual. :-)
Alaska Steele
2006-04-05
ch 25,
abuseThis was a beautifully written fic. What I liked about it best was how well you kept all characters, well, in character, most particularly House. That's so hard to do in a House/Cameron fic, and you accomplished it perfectly, so hats off to you! The added variable of Brooklyn was inventive and brilliant on your part; it was a great method to show the more caring side of House, as absent as it may seem at times. Anyway, wonderful job with this, and thanks for a great read. Keep writing.
-alaska
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