Lol very cute ^_^ I loved it Poor Goten XD

ookay! Good Story and i'm midd, i'm asking you to write more about this, K? i really like it - a LOT!! makes me grinning all the time. yay yay!
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Please update! This is awesome! Hahaha, poor Goten and Trunks! They must feel weird...

~firedraygon97

This is an incredible story. Humorous with a nice touch of romance woven throughout. I can just see the pure horror from both boys realizing their FATHERS were having S-E-X. And poor Goten and Trunks didn't even get to finish what they started on the couch! And what I wouldn't give to be a fly on the wall when they got "talked" to by Vegeta and Goku.

Wonderful story and excellent writing. And I love Goten's "voice" throughout.

I love this story. I've read it a million times and lost it a couple times but it's...I don't know WHAT I like about it, definately the shortness and very good POV, really realistic, and the twist is good...I guess I like all those things.

i usually read Shoujo-ai, but like Shounen-ai too and this one was pretty good, PLESE continue it, i love your fics

Who is knocking at the door? I just have to know!!
Is it Vegeta?or Trunks I doubt its Goku!!

Tell me now or else...I'll give you an offer you can't refuse. Got it.

lmao; that was hilarious! you must right more!!

Goten! You're such a fool~!!!
Of course your dad and Vegeta have a *relationship*, or why they bother to live together?
(Please write more...I love the story)

"Ugh. Good story. Me like. Write more now or I beat over head with club!"
I WANNA KNOW WHO'S KNOCKING ON THE DOOR!!!!! This was too kawaii!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!! I can't find that many Goten and Trunks fics... ::sniff::

Ugh. Good story. Me Like. Write More Now Or I Beat Over Head With Club! Well, that /is/ what you wanted us to write, right?

Write more...That was hilarious...I would scream bloody murder too...Then hide...Of course if it was my dad he would kick me out the house...It was funny though...Keep writing...

Dude, you rock. That wasn't all cheezy and sugar coated like all the other ones I've read. "It was a crisp autumn day and the leaves were painted shades of orange and red..." who gives a crap? You, my friend, are my hero. Kudos.

Ugh. Good story. Me Like. Write More Now Or I Beat Over Head With Club! *looks at what she just said* ^_^; *giggles* Funny story! *points up at her previously written, well thought out (Kula: Yeah right Alena: Shuddap) note* Do that!