OMG love this story!
i started reading this story under Gemini's name, but as she hasn't finished "adopting" it, i'm finishing it here
again, love this story!

I know you gave the story up, which is cool. I liked it fairly well. I'm usually pretty picky to review, though. (I know, I know, bad habit.) This one, though, I HAD to review to. ^^ My two main recurring characters that I use in original stories are Damian and Gabriel, so it kind of freaked me out a bit when I read about them. Plus, you know, they're always together in my stories. To my relief, however, their personalities were completely different from my characters'. I just thought it was kind of funny.

wow, never heard of a harpy creature fic for harry before i think that i rather like it, ^_^

Great.

OMG IM SORRY IF THIS SOUNDS MEAN BUT I AM SO MAD AT YOU RIGHT NOW! YOU ARE A VERY GIFTED AUTHOR AND I LOVED THE STORY THEN I CONTINUE READING IT ONLY TO FIND YOU GAVE UP ON IT?I CAN'T BELIEVE IT, IT WAS A VERY GOOD AND ORIGIONAL STORY AND TO THINK YOU THREW ALL THAT AWAY MAKES ME SAD. I wish you wouldn't have discontinued it, though it made me a little bit happier to be abe to read what was going to happen, so that counteracts a bit of my anger. like i said though, you are a very good writer and the story made me very happy until i got to chapter 34. once again sorry to be so mad but i had to tell you what i thought. sorry. i loved the story while it lasted though.

it is...was...good!

cute. i'm still pouting that you've abandonded this story, because it was totally awesome and way above par for what you usually find on ff, but c'est la vie.

seriously, your work's about on the same level as mine, and i was delighted to find it. so much of what you find, it's so obvious that they're begenning writers.

Harry seems to have accepted his fate way too quickly in my opinion...one min he was glaring, the next he is just going along with it?
I dont know...seems a bit forced :(
But since this story seems popular...i'll keep my high hopes for better...

HOW COULD YOU STOP WRITING!

Darling, I am sorry you had to give this up. I did so enjoy reading it, and I may go to the other persons FF page and read it as it progresses there. However, it will not be the same without you. You had a unique writing style, and I will forever love the many stories you wrote that I fell in love with. Thanks for writing and I hope life is treating you well. If it's not, I hope it treats you much better in the near future. <3

Wow, XD


From Me x

Wow! xD Where it was going was awesome! ;) It's sad that you couldn't finish it yourself but I'll still read it! Awesome job so far!! :D

OK. I don't mind the adoption of the story but how is gonna work. Will I get the next chapter is the story is in my alert list? Thanks for writing. :)

It was going to be a very good fic . Thank you for letting us see the outline.

i so wish you would finish the rest of the story !
it is a great plot , one of the best i've ever read !
or even if you could just work on it every once in a while that'd be great :) or if you know a good writer have them adopt it ! (though i personally think it'd be better if you finished it)