Please update soon. I am so glad I finally just sat down and read this. Anyway, please update.

This is a really amazing story. The situation you put Hanson in, I was so shocked, it started from the very first chapter...

Anyway I really love this story, it has a lot of raw emotion, external as well as internal conflicts.

I love how you write Penhall, Hanson, and Booker, and everyone... And I really like this Mac character I hope he'll be able to help Hanson, cause Tom really needs someone who knows how it feels.

Reading this story I'm always so surprised by everything. =) I really hope Hanson will be able to get over this problem because one thing I love even more than tradgedy and angst (I know I'm weird) is the healing process. Even if you did something like that did in the episode with Penhall and Booker on the football team, and you did something like '10 years later Hanson moved his toe' or something it would make me very happy (although just making him recover and actually WORK FOR IT would be much better hint hint).

This story is one of the best I've read, I favorited it and I'll be waiting in eager and impatiant anticipation for the next chapter!!

For the criticism the spelling isn't all that great in the early chapters but since you got that spellcheck thing it isn't bothering me anymore. So... I don't really have any criticism except watch out for typos and the occassionaly misplaced comma and all of that (BUT. HURRY. UP. AND. WRITE. THE. NEXT. CHAPTER. LOL). So that's it, and I really loved your story and I put it on my alerts list!

P.S. Sorry I know I am rambling here but it's late at night and this story hit me really close to my heart. I don't know why. Maybe cause I'm kinda freaky and I really care about Tom... Anyways great job, and keep writing!

hey i luv ur fanfic, i was wondering how long till u would update

hey not sure if you are still around but is there any possable way that i could get the rest of this story it is very good. i love the way you did the details in this piece please continue on.thank you.

excelant, the way u showed how booker feels and the way that tom and him can bond i good, i think that tom and him probily r getting closer, and i think both of them need eachother in oprder to work through things.

this is my favourite chapter so far, u do a really good job of keeping in charactere with the ppl in this story, i can imagine the characters perfectly with the show, i knew it would take doug to get through toms stuberness , as usual i hope tommy does get the help he needs/

wow i am happy u delt into how denise is feeling, he hasn't really delt with how he felt about what happened, and i'm glad u got him to talk i fel for him and tom, and i hope things get better

i luv the way u got booker and hanson to tlak, i htink it's a good idea u have them build a friendship, and i kinda guessed that tom would feel easier talking to denise considering he is the only one that doesn' treat him like he is a shard of glass, and going to break, keep it up i am soo addicted to ur story

nice chapter, i am so in love with ur story it is so addicting to me, well on to chapter 7 and i wander how booker is going to deal with tom back at work?

excelant chapter can't wait to read next one, this is getting good, it is realistic the way that u protray everyones personality, especially toms, he is the type of guyv to put up a front cus uhe doesn't want the ppl he care about to worry, good job

wow excelant chapter so much going on can't wait to read next chapter

wow now that was a dramatic chapter, it's so said the way that everyone is feeling especially now that tom knows that he is paralized. i feel the impact that everyone is feeling and i almost cryed, most stories i have read haven't made me feel this way u have an awsome writing style XD

wow what a twist @ the end, i like how u ended this chapter, wander what hanson will think off this probily will be heart brokei feel sry for him, and the team. well on tho chapter 3, i'll read it later though i g2g for now, email me if u have any other stories i want to read ur stories if u do u have an awsome writing style, that grabs the audiences attention.

awsome 1st chapyer keep up the good work, btw can u read my story called painful my friend and i wrote it, i luv ur writing style keep it up, u keep things supenceful just how i like it :p

absolutely brilliant.
loved it
6 stars!