Sorry, I don't know why that last review posted twice... oops!

This has been such a great story from the start, I'm disappointed to see that it wasn't finished. It's been nearly 5 years since you've updated but I don't care, I really hope you decide to pick it up again. So what, it's been so long- I know that me and all the others would be stoked if you started writing again; and don't worry about having lost your reading base- if any of the others are like me they'll be checking the updates regularly and when they see your story in there they'll be so excited. Besides most of the readers said they've favorited this story and signed up for the updates.

Anyway I just wanted to say how this is a great piece of work, you're really very talented. I really hope that Hanson gets his legs back with some hard work and maybe even get a little revenge later :) I'm a huge fan of angst for characters I love and I love Tom Hanson- I also love the recovery/healing process; I used to think I was a freak because I liked it so much but from what I've seen from other reviewers is there's a lot of us out there! Thank god! Lol.

If you are still around please consider finishing this story, while I thoroughly enjoyed all of the beginning I feel like that was all set up and we were just getting into the meat of the story.

Here's to hoping to hear from you soon! :)

This has been such a great story from the start, I'm disappointed to see that it wasn't finished. It's been nearly 5 years since you've updated but I don't care, I really hope you decide to pick it up again. So what, it's been so long- I know that me and all the others would be stoked if you started writing again; and don't worry about having lost your reading base- if any of the others are like me they'll be checking the updates regularly and when they see your story in there they'll be so excited. Besides most of the readers said they've favorited this story and signed up for the updates.

Anyway I just wanted to say how this is a great piece of work, you're really very talented. I really hope that Hanson gets his legs back with some hard work and maybe even get a little revenge later :) I'm a huge fan of angst for characters I love and I love Tom Hanson- I also love the recovery/healing process; I used to think I was a freak because I liked it so much but from what I've seen from other reviewers is there's a lot of us out there! Thank god! Lol.

If you are still around please consider finishing this story, while I thoroughly enjoyed all of the beginning I feel like that was all set up and we were just getting into the meat of the story.

Here's to hoping to hear from you soon! :)

I love that Booker rushes to Tom in just socked feet; it belies the concern he's trying so hard to hide. Not to mention, were anyone to observe his shoeless feet they'd see how much of a soft spot he has for Tom whether he'll admit it or not. Great story!

I'm sorry to see you never finished this brilliant story. I really enjoyed what you had of it. You have the characters down so well. You describe things and show things in your writing that makes the story so real. This is like a cliffhanger, but at least you know you will see what happens in a few months, I see you haven't touched this since July of 06 so I guess it will never get done. But know this could have been one of the top stories around here. I love how Booker has been and what they found out. How Doug has been and the team. How Booker brought Mac in to show Tom how to do things for himself. Usually he would have had rehab to show him and also work with his legs to stay tones but it seemed in the one chapter that he wouldn't do it. So Mac is making him which was really good and I looked forward to that and the case, to Hanson getting himself back and getting the punks. Well, again for the record this story is written so well with a plot that could have been a movie of the show. You write it so well. Sue

Please update soon. I am so glad I finally just sat down and read this. Anyway, please update.

This is a really amazing story. The situation you put Hanson in, I was so shocked, it started from the very first chapter...

Anyway I really love this story, it has a lot of raw emotion, external as well as internal conflicts.

I love how you write Penhall, Hanson, and Booker, and everyone... And I really like this Mac character I hope he'll be able to help Hanson, cause Tom really needs someone who knows how it feels.

Reading this story I'm always so surprised by everything. ) I really hope Hanson will be able to get over this problem because one thing I love even more than tradgedy and angst (I know I'm weird) is the healing process. Even if you did something like that did in the episode with Penhall and Booker on the football team, and you did something like '10 years later Hanson moved his toe' or something it would make me very happy (although just making him recover and actually WORK FOR IT would be much better hint hint).

This story is one of the best I've read, I favorited it and I'll be waiting in eager and impatiant anticipation for the next chapter!

For the criticism the spelling isn't all that great in the early chapters but since you got that spellcheck thing it isn't bothering me anymore. So... I don't really have any criticism except watch out for typos and the occassionaly misplaced comma and all of that (BUT. HURRY. UP. AND. WRITE. THE. NEXT. CHAPTER. LOL). So that's it, and I really loved your story and I put it on my alerts list!

P.S. Sorry I know I am rambling here but it's late at night and this story hit me really close to my heart. I don't know why. Maybe cause I'm kinda freaky and I really care about Tom... Anyways great job, and keep writing!

hey i luv ur fanfic, i was wondering how long till u would update

hey not sure if you are still around but is there any possable way that i could get the rest of this story it is very good. i love the way you did the details in this piece please continue you.

excelant, the way u showed how booker feels and the way that tom and him can bond i good, i think that tom and him probily r getting closer, and i think both of them need eachother in oprder to work through things.

this is my favourite chapter so far, u do a really good job of keeping in charactere with the ppl in this story, i can imagine the characters perfectly with the show, i knew it would take doug to get through toms stuberness , as usual i hope tommy does get the help he needs/

wow i am happy u delt into how denise is feeling, he hasn't really delt with how he felt about what happened, and i'm glad u got him to talk i fel for him and tom, and i hope things get better

i luv the way u got booker and hanson to tlak, i htink it's a good idea u have them build a friendship, and i kinda guessed that tom would feel easier talking to denise considering he is the only one that doesn' treat him like he is a shard of glass, and going to break, keep it up i am soo addicted to ur story

nice chapter, i am so in love with ur story it is so addicting to me, well on to chapter 7 and i wander how booker is going to deal with tom back at work?

excelant chapter can't wait to read next one, this is getting good, it is realistic the way that u protray everyones personality, especially toms, he is the type of guyv to put up a front cus uhe doesn't want the ppl he care about to worry, good job