I like this... I like this a lot... just one question... what is JAG?
I like most of your fics, and I notice persistence in correct grammar. I don't read the JAG fics... only the Harry Potter ones...
So...HAPPY WRITING!
~Rose

great story!

it was great! Loved it!

I love it! ya, i know how tedious it is to see 100 people read your story and only like 6 people review. This really is a great story, and it is probably my favourite l/j one shot. I re-read it sometimes too! again, excellent job.

~sb

Your story is really cute. I love Lily/James fics.

I dont know why this fic doesn't have more reviews, its a really lovely piece of work!

fab job ;)

That was really really cute. I loved it.

Cute! Lily is such a shy little girl in this! And the end...so funnily awkward. I would have liked it if you kept the "shades of red" theme throughout the entire story, tying up the end or something, instead of being in the very beginning. The different reds were quite beautifully described. Anyways, I liked!

Hey!
I just read your story and I really like it. You describe Lily's feelings very well. Lily thinks and acts exactly how I imagine her. Do you know what I want to say? It's not easy for me to write in english. In german, I could describe much better what I want to say. So, I'm sorry about that. Have you written other fanfictions?
Greetings *lils*