  princess.ash5 9/8/07 . chapter 20 This is a great story i think you should finish it if you can . Plz plz try 2 finish it. Thanks alot :) Ashleigh |
| A Girl 2/20/07 . chapter 33 Wow
Really weell done,
Its amazing acutally&&
the ending was actually great:D |
 Princess Aphrodite-goddess 7/18/05 . chapter 29Hey great story. It was very cute. It is very different then the stories I'm used to reading. I liked it alot.
Perhaps, you can do a sequel.
Diana |
| Fiendish-Serena 1/6/05 . chapter 33 I could give some negative comments on this particular writing style, but I can tell they would be lost on you. I can see that this is the first story you have ever written and that you have improved dramatically. However, this is a good idea, perhaps you should rewrite it? |
| a-unique-rose 12/30/04 . chapter 33 great story...but i really think serenity and darien should become more involved. |
| Demonia2 6/27/03 . chapter 30 I love it |
| Demonia2 6/27/03 . chapter 29 I love it |
| Demonia2 6/27/03 . chapter 28 I love it |
| Demonia2 6/27/03 . chapter 27 I love it |
| Demonia2 6/27/03 . chapter 26 I love it |
| Demonia2 6/27/03 . chapter 25 I love it |
| Demonia2 6/27/03 . chapter 24 I love it |
| Demonia2 6/27/03 . chapter 23 I love it |
| Demonia2 6/27/03 . chapter 22 I love it |
| Demonia2 6/27/03 . chapter 21 I love it |
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