Oh please come up with more, it was so great!

WOW i like this story i have been looking for a story of Achilles and Helen well i guess this is as close as im going to get i guess since i didnt see others(if there r i must be blinde lol) I hope u update soon cant wait to see what happens to the other lol :) i hope to see more of Achilles and Helen :)

I LOVE IT SO MUCH PLZ PWEATY PWEASE PLZ ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD MORE MORE MORE SOON SOON SOON SOON!PLZ

lol a tad confuzing lol butt amusing

(i'm smiling right now!)

maybe u shouldhave longer moments between room/tent and a bit more detail

over all good

I think it's interesting! Please update soon! I love your view on the concept but I feel so sorry for Helen.

good concept. looking forward to the next chapter

please update! i'll hate you forever if you don't.