Wow. That was powerful. I think this story is awsome in it's powerful message of what a sibling will do to help his brother get over one of the most difficult things in the world to get over. I like it.

omg this story is so deep and emotional! i love it!

genius...pure genius

This is amazing. Really powerful. Your style is very good and I too liked the interplay of the two events. The emotions are well portrayed and it's sweet how Gordon's plan has worked - all the descriptions of him making love to/with Scott are detailed and the actual rape vague ... it's a very clever ploy. Dark and yet brilliant!

Wow! The detail in this dark fic is amazing. It is almost common place to hear of women being raped and how they have to deal with the after affects but to get it from a male victim's perspective is equally horrifying. I am glad that Scott was there for Gordon in every way that was needed. Hope to see you write more of these stories.

This is a truly dark and emotional fic. I loved it.

Poor Gordon what an emotional wreck he became. Great to see Scott so loving and understanding.

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considering the story content I thought this was really good. I liked the way you had a different colour for each section and the way you intertwined the love-making of gordon and scott with the rape of gordon. great fanfic!