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Youko Rayah 2008-08-04 . chapter 1
o.O

I like this one. It reminds me of a Ranma 1/2 fic I read a while back where Ranma and Prince Herb faced off and Akane made a comment of it would ether be a stalemate (no attack from ether due to no opening) or a single attack resulting in a decisive victory.

The visualization you used of the terrain and conditions, along with the reasons for why certain typs of fighters could not help, just goes to show how skilled of strategists both Optimus and Megs can be.

nicely done, and very well written.
Jessie07 2008-06-01 . chapter 1
Cool story!! I really liked it a lot! Keep up the great work!!
HitokiriKurisuta 2008-05-25 . chapter 1
That was just awesome. ^grins^ Loved the fact that their entire conversation passed without ever speaking a word to each other; a real testament to just how long they’ve been fighting one another.
Tatsumaki-sama 2008-01-19 . chapter 1
Love how Optimus and Megatron only communicated through their actions. It's interesting to see how well the two leaders know each other, despite being enemies.
PrettyArbitrary 2007-05-30 . chapter 1
Oh, that was frigging awesome. After ten million years, you have to figure they know each other that well.
Kenya Starflight 2007-01-22 . chapter 1
Wow. An intense battle, and not even a shot fired.

Good job once again! You have a loyal fan. :)
Lady Razorsharp 2006-10-09 . chapter 1
Ooh, good one. Very nice.
Darkscream 2006-10-01 . chapter 1
*Nods* I like how short, but sweet this is.

You really don't always need words when the smallest of guestures work.
Super Chocolate Bear 2005-11-08 . chapter 1
That was great - I like the whole idea of Prime and Megatron having this little unspoken thing between them.
Draange 2005-09-30 . chapter 1
Ah, the beauty of unspoken conversation.
Tirya King 2005-09-30 . chapter 1
Wow. Just...wow. That was very well done. I like how the two leaders have total respect for the other's skill as well as knowing each other well enough to know what the others are thinking. The descriptions were wonderful as well; it felt like we were really there. I loved it! ^_^
Cat in the web 2005-09-30 . chapter 1
I like it. It shows how good Optimus and Megatron know each other.
DesertCat87 2005-09-29 . chapter 1
O... I like this! Very different! I love the descriptions in this one, especially with the weather. Great Job yet again MariaShadow! :)
turbomagnus 2005-09-29 . chapter 1
I liked it, it showed the tactical side of Megatron and the respect for each other's abilities the two leaders possess.
Tiamat1972 2005-09-29 . chapter 1
Awesome! Truly awesome! And not a word spoken until everyone was ordered back to base. Definitely another one to add to my fave list. Always glad to see one of your fics, Maria. They are always top notch.
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