Perfect descriptions! Love it!

AH! Mika-chan! I lurves you!

ahem...I really liked this peometry (spelt wrong for a reason)! I especially liked the way it seemed to count on like in a rhythm as the "story" went along. Very nicely done.

...this is Natty by the way...

Great job, keep up the good work.

That was really good, I liked it a lot! The only mistake I saw in there (What Krage was saying) was about the number of Quatre's sisters. He only has 29 sisters. But other than that, perfect! No surprise you got full points!

Its great...its really good you should feel really proud. The only possible flaw i can pick up on is the number of Quatre's sisters. He has 29 sisters. Other than that...wonderful writing i love it...