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Maniacinthemaking
2009-11-19 . chapter 1
i love it! pure genious!
Renesmee-worththefight
2009-11-14 . chapter 1
1. We could have a dirty conversation right in the middle of Diagon Alley and no one would ever know."
2. “They look like bat **.”

-dies of laughter- Oh my goodness! Ron -shakes head- But I love him! He's SO funny! They're such a good couple. I love them. They're def one of my fav in the series. This was really good I was laughing the whole time XD
KaChan84
2009-10-24 . chapter 1
this was hilarious!! haha, i laughed so much^^ great!
AsKalYo
2009-08-27 . chapter 1
*sigh* potatoes...once again, you don't fail to make me laugh my ** off...
Drishti Choudhury
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
Oh the randomness! Funny randomness, though... Nice job! =)
asta123pasta
2009-07-16 . chapter 1
Awsome! Laughed a lot! xD
KHAOS-XD
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
haha this is funny i love it
laffinalot
2009-06-12 . chapter 1
GRR!
fanfiction is refusing to let me log in!
ANYWAY
i loved this!
it was funny and fabulous! (:
Tsona
2009-05-16 . chapter 1
Pointless? Who cares! Adorable! And rather well done. From observation, the trick of writing stories of pure conversation is to make it obvious who's who and to get across the action too. There were only a few places where the speaker got a tad confusing, specifically in the shorter sections ("Okay, I really don't think..." "This is getting tiresome...") but both times the confusion cleared quite quickly. I must ask though: what happened in the "..." and "-" sections? Is there a difference between ellipses and dashes? Sometimes you could guess; you did a rather good job on getting certain gestures across with the dialogue (Ron getting on his knees, Hermione throwing bones across the table, Ron pouting). I commend you on trying and succeeding with a difficult medium. :)
CocoaCollidoscope
2008-12-06 . chapter 1
Aw, that's so sweet. And it's totally R/H. :)
alicecullenlovegood
2008-11-22 . chapter 1
Erm... o-kay...?
Your Valensi
2008-08-22 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHA. this is hilarious. Ron does have a point. Having innuendo-filled conversations about potatoes IS a wonderful idea. :D
MadeNew
2008-08-06 . chapter 1
Haha! Absolutely hopeless! A bit dirty, too, but I loved it. You kept them in character so very well!
Bunnyluv611
2008-06-01 . chapter 1
i loved it
xLupinxLoverx
2007-12-29 . chapter 1
That was hilarious!! All of it was so funny, I can't pick my favorite part
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