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| iconoclasticone 2008-09-19 ch 1,  | abuseOh, that was so good! I actually gasped out loud when I heard the jury being asked what the verdict was for murder...I thought Olivia died from the GSW! Oh, soo good! I'm so glad this wasn't longer than a chapter, I'd have died waiting to find out what happened! Really good job grabbing the characters' personalities, your writing is succinct yet emotional, very nice all around. Thanks for sharing this with us. -Melissa |
| xoanna21 2008-09-06 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. There was so much emotion in this story. Write some more. :) and make them longer. |
| flapjacks 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abusegreat story! i like hows its a long one shot, no chapters. good writing too. laura |
| Piper-Jacko06-Butterflygirl 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abusewow this is cool. My hearts only just got out of my throat though. Great writing! |
| Tamryn Eradani 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseI love SVU though I'd never tried fanfiction for it. This was really good. When they said murder in the second degree I was like no, but then it wasn't what I thought, good job with that. Munch is one of my favorite characters and you wrote him nicely. |
| katie janeway 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuse*Laughs* Despite all the tension in this, there were still several parts that had me giggling - just random lines here and there. And the end, of course. |
| IndyAgent 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuseI also thought for a second that Liv died. Aww. Glad she didn't. But I was hoping Aaron's question would have been answered. But good work. Please continue writing. |
| UnStabler 2006-03-01 ch 1, | abuseAww, I like it! Good job. |
| Lazy-Hazy-Crazy-Dayz 2006-02-05 ch 1, | abusewow! i loved that story! i was great! :D ~chicky~ |
| jcn2416 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abusewow thatt was really good... you mad it sound like Liv. died :( i love it and hope you write more like it nikki |
| SVU Luva 2005-12-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved the story! Not overly romantic or long and drawn out, just straight and to the point. When I heard murder in the second degree I thought "oh no, she died!" But was relieved it was only the partner. Again nice job and keep on writing! |
| iluvolivia 2005-12-11 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is so much better than the actual series its awesome |
| Sheyna-osirissystemlady 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseAw. Sweet fic. |
| recklesslove 2005-10-09 ch 1, | abuseI think this is a great story! When I saw this episode, I always wanted to see more of Elliot's reaction since Olivia was in the same building when the shooting went down. I love your take on the way the episode could have gone. You've inspired me to write some SVU fanfic of my own. |
| SVU 2005-10-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseOK good story but the first part was a take off of an episode already shown on l&o svu when Fin got shot but the ending was different so that was good |