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degrassijayandalex
2008-06-24
ch 17,
abuseOk well I love fan fiction for two reasons one it begining a jalex fan fiction, and they are my favorite couple on degrassi.Second reasons is just plain becasue it was a great fan fiction.Oh and there is a third reason because Alex and Amy made up and are friends again.Well I was going to review all the chapters as I read them but I couldn't wait to finish reading all 17 chapters.So I just decided that I would make one big review about all the chapters in one.Well I was just thinking about which chapter was my favorite and I don't think I could picl, because they are all amazing.I did really really like it though when Alex and Jay had there first kiss after they broke up.Also I don't remeber what chapter it was in, but it was a flashback from Alex and it was the first time that she saw Jay.I was like wow she knew she liked him the first time she saw him, and she didn't even talk to him yet.lol.Now I think that the chapter called my Knight and Shining armor,don't know what number chapter it was, but that was one of my favorites.I loved how Jay had his jaw cleanached(sp?) at alex's mom boyfriend.That was so sweat of him.Also I just wanted to say that I loved the part when Alex goes to Amy's house and Spinner answers the door that part was funny.lol.Then I think it was in chapter 16, when Jay goes to get a shower then Alex comes in.Then Jay is like your going to make me late for work.Then after they get out Alex was like Jay was actually late for work.lol.I was seriuolsy lmao there.lol.Anyway now that my really long review is over im going to post it.Oh and I hope that you write a lot more jalex fan fictions.
EmmaJay2gether4ever8
2005-12-05
ch 17,
abusethe story was awesome but it looked like at the ending u were rushing to try to finish it.
StorytellerD
2005-11-04
ch 16,
abuseGreat to see Alex telling off Craig and being a good friend to Ellie.
EmmaJay2gether4ever8
2005-11-03
ch 16,
abusePMSASAP!
xenasargo2
2005-11-01
ch 16,
abuseI'm with Alex on this one. Craig...You're an ** to choose that skeez Manny over someone like Ellie! IDIOTIC **!
EmmaJay2gether4ever8
2005-10-24
ch 15,
abusePMSASAP!
StorytellerD
2005-10-16
ch 14,
abuseThis is a good story. I like the way you've been mixing in flashbacks to Alex's past along with the current situations. I'm also glad you're including her newer friendships with Ellie and Paige.
dayummxsammm
2005-10-14
ch 14,
abuseaw its so good, update soon.
EmmaJay2gether4ever8
2005-10-14
ch 14,
abusePMSASAP!
DancingBabe
2005-10-13
ch 12,
abuseAwesome story! I just love it.Great job writing it. I hope you update soon
BabyJane14
2005-10-12
ch 12,
abuseaw, Jay's so sweet! more soon!
EmmaJay2gether4ever8
2005-10-12
ch 12,
abusePMSASAP!
degrassigurl333
2005-10-12
ch 1,
abuseWow! This is awesome! I have a whole new perspective on Jay and Alex now! Great job! Write more ASAP!
tribaltaisan
2005-10-11
ch 11,
abuseThis has been really good so far!
BabyJane14
2005-10-11
ch 11,
abusesorry i didn't reviesw earlyer i love both of the chapters and i can't wait for more! please post more soon!!
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