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| Angelfirenze 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was excellent. I enjoyed your illustrations of the different things Eames and Bishop brought to working with Bobby, even if what Bishop brought really wasn't what he needed. But, then again, that might have been what the writers were going for. Which is perfect. |
| Scifi-warper 2005-10-06 ch 1, | abuseSee, Bobby. Listen to your partner. She's not going to stop either. She's just as dedicated as you are. Great fic. I always love the ones with Alex having to take care of Bobby. Very cool. |
| netherfield 2005-09-30 ch 1, | abuseTightly written, devoid of corn. You manage to convey the bond between the two main characters subtly, yet powerfully: When Eames sits on the table 'within reach'-wonderful. You allow her a much deserved place of importance. One, I find, the show barely affords her. Well done. |
| TrinityWildcat 2005-09-30 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this - very accomplished and well written, and it's a new angle on the season opener. I look forward to more of your writing. |
| TriStateCopFan 2005-09-30 ch 1, | abuseNice! I like how in his dream, it's Bishop telling him he can't do something and in his reality, Eames is there w/ her confidence telling him "we" will find her. I liked the ep. - I think VDO did a good job --his face expressed the conflicting emotions. Maybe she'll be back for the season finale? |