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| Von 2008-03-08 ch 4,  | abuseWhat a lovely follow up! I absolutely adore the idea of Excalibur being meant for Chris and you've explained it so logically too. I can actually see Chris being a better ruler than Wyatt.. less hotheaded, arrogant.. and frighteningly dedicated to doing what needs to be done, regardless of the cost to himself. Can we see him interacting with the world who know him for what he is? |
| meilinglovesshaoran 2008-01-28 ch 4, | abuseYou can't just leave it here! More! Please?! I love this fic! |
| goldacharmed 2007-11-08 ch 4, | abuseomg dude you are like the best that was so good I've never read something that good please tell me were to find part one and i don't know if you already made a part 3 yet but if you didnt i beg you to please do so you can always tell me on the thats how i found this ps I'm a wrighter too so i never heard of this website before you so thank you I'll be putting story's up soon as well but they wouldn't be as good ** yours you should make a spin off script with a simalare story line see how the people on the charmedsons like it i know i sure did |
| Ana 2007-07-10 ch 4, anon. | abuseDo you think I want to loose my mother? - AH!! you don't loose your mother you lose your mother. What is it with you writer and that word? None of you ever get it right. |
| Marcus1233 2007-05-29 ch 4, | abuseCan't wait to lay eyes on the next chapter..knowing the Charmed Ones history fate'll probably give up with her hands in the air with exasperation... |
| Marcus1233 2007-05-29 ch 2, | abusePoor Piper. Three times of knowing she died and left her family must be a real bitc...you know what I mean. |
| Match Box 2007-05-08 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis is great! I really hope you keep going, I wanna know what happens next! |
| Twin_Swords 2006-11-10 ch 4, anon. | abuseWow! Um... what else to say, um... wow again? Keep going! Must... read... more... :) |
| scme 2006-10-26 ch 4, | abusethis is great, i really like it. hope your still going to continue cos i would love to knwo what happens! please carry on! |
| E 2006-10-03 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis is a pretty good story, are you going to continue it? |
| Pinky Barbie 2006-01-27 ch 4, | abusefabii! :) |
| FastFuriousChick 2006-01-13 ch 4, | abuseYAY! I LOVE THIS!! IT"S AWESOME! |
| Altaira 2005-11-24 ch 4, | abuseHa ha ha ha! The thought of Piper being given a piggy back! This fanfic is going great! |
| akemi 2005-11-24 ch 4, anon. | abuseBrilliant concept. I love the idea that Chris was the heir, not Wyatt. Love that he'll be the ruler of peace in the world. It's just sad that Wyatt had to die. But at least he's the whitelighter of Chris. Anyways, I'm looking forward to more. Please update as soon. |
| Nathy1000000 2005-11-23 ch 4, | abuseGreat! I want to see that! I want to see the world following Chris. I really like this story. The subplot about Chris` fate is really original. And the Piper-Wyatt interaction was really tender..”I used to carry you that way”, lol. And what an ending. Now I have to know what they’ll see. I loved the prophecy and how you described the place. Can’t wait to see the future! |