Nope. They were not OOC at all. I just loved this one-shot. It was definitely IC.

Hm, I can just imagine Unohana say "Hai hai, Kuchiki-taichou." I unno, it sounds so much like her.

I loved it, so subtle, I love all the ByaUno moments I can find, oww, I will want to see more of them written by you, most of the ByaUno works are made by YunCyn and Arwen Dark Sorceress of Fate, and I love their work.

Also it's the second time that I find Hitsugaya catching Byakuya in his Unohana staring, the first time I saw that was on Taste The Irony, wonder if that inspired you?

No it was good do some more the characters, the writing style and everything was good keep on writing.^_~

Although I've never seen Byakuya-taichou this way before, I think it kind of suits him. For Unohana-san I think you've got her down flawlessly. Byahana's are real eye-openers, thanks for showing me this.

the plot for this ByakuyaRetsu thing was so cool! never imagine that they were that good for each other ... you opened my eyes! hehe ... more power and i hope i get to see some hitsuhina fics as well ... i'm a big fan of them too hehe
ja, update soon!

-- lazybluishgurl013/ Gia

Aw!! What a lovely Hitsuhina oneshot. ^_^
Aw... ::squeals::

oh my nice. i liked the hitsuhina stuff it was cute. and the byakuyaxunohana was nice :D!

Though I'm more of a Zaraki/Unohana fan, I thought this was pretty well done. I'm a fan now *laughs* Well done once again!

MFG!This was great,you had everything perfect and it was so great, please keep writing more ByaUno they are the best couple.

My God girl, this was perfect, I loved the HistuHina it was sad and angst yet so utterly sweet.

But I must say that it was your second one-shot of ByakuyaxRetsu that won my heart, I have loved that pairing for so long and you made a great job.

Both were in character,the plot was great,Rukia making the matchmaking was cool to,Hitsugaya looking curious about Bya strange behavior around Unohana was great as well.

I'll so much like if you can make a continuation of this one-shot to tell us what happened on that lunch time,it will be interesting? I also encourage you to keep writing ByaRet and HitsuHina because you're so good at it, so keep going.

I enjoyed this ^_^ I wish you'd make it into a 2-shot though!

I love Hitsu/Hina! Your description and attitude of Hitsugaya was well done!!

OMG! *goes into crazy fan mode upgraded by sugar* I loved this tis was so beautiful.

Please write more ByaRet they are a kick ** couple and this little thing rocked my socks, I love it and you did a great job I didn't see it OCC at all, you kept them really nicely.

*throws virtual cookies to the authoress* Please more ByaRet in a close future...also looking forward to the HitsuHina.

^^ rukia is great... lol, i really like fic. usually, i only see kenpachi and unohana, so this chapter was really interesting to read. i loved the fact that byakuya asked her out to lunch the next day.

this story wasn't really that ooc, i thought you did a good job describing byakuya. he was pretty serious thourghout the story, and i loved the way he reacted to unohana the next day at the captain's meeting.

anyway, great work! ^^ please write more!

O interesting pairing...but it was ok :]