There are a few spelling errors. This is all I have to say on the bad side. However, I really really enjoyed reading this one shot. You've totally captured Harry's character making the whole thing very believable. I like this one. Keep up the writing. You've got a talent there.

nice but u made ginny sound rude or wat to say... not bothered abt anythn in the start of the story.

I call it good.

Romantic, and soft. I liked it.

I liked it. It was really sweet!

I'm a sucker for a well writen HarryXGinny. Three and a half thumbs up.